| | eeps... please review my profile :)Page 1 of 1 | | Ok, so here I am, might aswell throw my profile in with the rest for reviewing... :) I've been on for a while and had a little interest, but can't hurt to try to fix it up a little.... please be gentle... actually no, don't, I'd rather hear the truth and change it... | |
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| eeps... please review my profile :)
Posted: 7/4/2012 3:18:48 AM | Less pics, more variety - feel like I saw the same pic 8 times
Add interests to the interest section, they are searched as keywords
Mention your kids further down, it shouldn't be the first words out of your mouth | |
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Posted: 7/4/2012 3:40:32 AM | There is absolutely no substance at all to your profile.
You are an Ozzy who's lived in the USA for a dozen years and you're "somewhat new to Vegas" where you live with your two children. Oh, and you've got an eclectic taste in music. That's basically it.
Firstly, you should actually disclose your "body type" and get a decent full body shot uploaded to your profile. Loads of people on this site either lie about their size (regardless of what size they really are) in their written profile, or put an old picture up anyway, or they don't post a full body shot up and choose to put "undisclosed" under their body type. And the end of the day it's all just one big cop out and it's always going to lead to heartbreak.
Secondly, you should talk more about what interests you have and the type of guy you're looking for. Nobody needs to give their life story in their profile, but some sort of background is always helpful.
When I read your short profile I assumed that you moved to the USA twelve years ago, met an american and had two kids, seperated, and now you're moving on.
Right now that's none of my business, but do you get my drift here?
All the best. | |
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| eeps... please review my profile :)
Posted: 7/4/2012 7:58:53 AM | Choose a body type and include a full length photo. There are guys who will search by body type, how many do you think will search for "Undisclosed"?
Don't ever answer anything "Prefer not to say".
When "Separated" indicate how long and when it will be final.
When you have kids you should indicate how many, how old and how often.
The first 37 words appear in searches and are critical.
Read the two green posts at the beginning of this forum on profile content. (You need more!) | |
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| eeps... please review my profile :)
Posted: 7/4/2012 11:16:48 AM | | Ok, am currently working on all the above suggestions... but here's a question... I am separated and not divorced but not for any reason other than financial, my ex and I get along well and there is NO chance of us getting back together... should I keep my listing as separated or should I go with single? I was told that people don't like separated because it indicates a possibility of reconciliation... | |
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| eeps... please review my profile :)
Posted: 7/4/2012 11:33:09 AM | You're separated, be honest about it. If you are able, mention when the divorce will be in your profile/no chance or reconciliation.
Lose the 'duck face' pic. It's not attractive at all. | |
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| eeps... please review my profile :)
Posted: 7/6/2012 5:03:40 AM | | Get a friend to take some pictures of you, it's hard to take your own photos. That's why many people have bathroom mirror pic shots, or of themselves in the car. | |
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