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 shaneoo7
Joined: 2/5/2009
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hey everybody i would like opinions on how my profile is because i feel it needs some work.i dont mind criticism but dont get to crazy . but i would really appreciate the help on it hope this goes well.
 Devakira86
Joined: 6/8/2012
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Posted: 7/15/2012 3:26:38 AM
Starting at the top :)

Your photos are very varied, in some you lo0k clean shaven and very sharp! others you look pretty scruffy, its cute, but as this is a dating site, you might want to just put the better ones on, keep up that "clean" lookin image, its very attractive when a guy looks after himself! No matter what size, i can see you are a bit heavier, and when you dress up you look real good!
I would make the second or last photos your main profile image(the one with the black jackets), as these will be the first people see of you, and trust me! First impressions.... we all know we judge!
Also the car one? you look more like a bandit than a ninja with the balaclava on. errr........???? Delete!!!!




hey hey hey!!! The names Shane and being funny is one thing among others that keeps my head up in this world.
i've said this before, and i'll keep sayin it, telling people you are funny doesn’t work, Just show your humour throughout your profile instead!


I'm half Grenada and half Brazilian very two different styles and heritage that I love exploring on a high intellect basis.

Interesting background! But what do you mean you explore them on a high intellect basis? I would reword this, something along the lines of : your mother is "insert country here" your father is "other country here" how passionate you are about either country, and what exactly about each country..


I'm very interested in cars of course what guy isn't and im going to uti to be a mechanic then after im going to college again to be a mechanical engineer.
cool!


Im a gamer but not so much anymore since i work now but when i do play i would play racing or anything with cars you know gotta get my fast and furious on , shooters like gears of war or call of duty ,fighting games and even flying here and there even tho i crash its not my fault something hit my plane damn ufos!!!
Deeelete! and put gaming under your interests.


lol.other stuff i like is art,movies,nice food,road trips heck traveling period i like and would enjoy.I also like cooking even tho I'm still learning ,going to parks,seeing movies ,go karting and going outside a lot I hate staying home its boring and not interesting.
List Art, Movies, Nice food, road trips, travelling, cooking, go-karting, outdoors, and movies to your interests, and delete this paragraph!


I feel what makes me different is im not a b****h i give respect and would like it in return which seems reasonable.
Not a what? does that say b!tch? really no need for this on your profile, it will scare away the nice girls!


Im very caring and i do alot for people . i don't get mad that often id rather take care of the situation in a calm matter instead of getting worked up over it.
I dont think you need to discuss your personality on your profile, i don’t think someone who wants to contact you has any interest in wanting to start a fight with you, so you could probably take this off, as its more something that someone will learn when they start talking to you.


as for goals My main goal is to not have to worry about living check to check having money to get the things i want and what my future family wants with no problem that's what it is and im sticking to it.
Do you have any other goals? Do you want to travel? be careful what you write about money on your profile, im not saying it will, but it MAY attract someone who is looking for a guy that will provide for them. AKA a gold digger, as you have already listed that you are a sweet caring guy, you might be a sucker for someone like that.


so if you wanna know more feel free to message me and have a great day!!!:).
okay!

you need to make your profile a little more formatted so its easier to read, run it through a word program, fix the spelling errors, and elaborate on the interesting things so that women will have a reason to email you! :) Good luck sweetie!
 shaneoo7
Joined: 2/5/2009
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Posted: 7/15/2012 10:08:43 AM
thanks i needed the help now i see the light lol
 shaneoo7
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Posted: 7/15/2012 11:15:09 AM
well i updated it how is it now ?
 Irish Eyez
Joined: 12/30/2008
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Posted: 7/15/2012 11:38:40 AM


Ugh. Where to begin.

Your pics have you looking like a poser. Not good.

Your profile is LOADED with spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors and one, long-assed run-on sentence. Run it through MS Word and correct everything.

You really should try to make a better effort if you want women to reciprocate.
 shaneoo7
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Posted: 7/15/2012 3:14:59 PM
i don't mind the comments about the spelling and fixing the profile but poser really ?. there is no way that those pics imply that. that's how i dress i am my own self if some woman thinks that because of a pic then shes not the woman for me simple as that.
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