| | Please reviewPage 1 of 1 | The #1 problem I am perceiving is that I appear to be very active, and that may be tough for a girl to match. I recognize that, and that's how I am, so it should serve as a good filter.
I am open to your feedback - please roast it :).
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Posted: 7/15/2012 7:42:11 AM | No, the number one problem is the girl in your primary pic.
You don't have any suitable primary pics.
<-- click my History for my pic guidelines.
Delete:
Drop me a line if you'd like to chat, Unnecessary, needy, they know what to do.
Delete:
I am not looking for a pen pal. Negative, unnecessary, redundant.
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Going to see a movie is a bad first date idea :). Correct, but negative and unnecessary.
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Posted: 7/15/2012 7:49:36 AM | If that was my sister in the pic would that be okay?
I made the other changes you suggested, although I initially disagreed with them I can understand where you're coming from with that - from a girl's point of view. | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 7:50:47 AM | Your #1 problem is that guys vastly outnumber women on this site. Although I should qualify that this is a belief for which I have no hard evidence. Here are my ideas to improve your profile.
- Find an even clearer head shot for your main picture. One which does not have some woman’s hair blocking part of your face.
- Never use "girl" to describe anyone older than a teenager (here or everyday life). Use lady, woman, or simply 'someone'; we know you're looking for a female
- Lose the last two sentences, they are unnecessary
- No need to mention what you're not going to do on a first date; what you would like to do is enough. | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 7:52:37 AM | | Oh, Campfires beat me to it. | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 7:55:03 AM | When you say last two sentences, I had implemented some changes (possibly while you were typing your reply). Are you saying to remove this, or this is fine? I don't see the problem with:
I get along with most people and we're ultimately all here to meet. | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 7:57:58 AM |
Oh, Campfires beat me to it. Nothing wrong with that. Reinforcement and consensus is a good thing.
If that was my sister in the pic would that be okay? NO!
It is an immediate subconscious psychological reaction. You are a "cheater". Doesn't matter who it is or what the caption says. | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 8:02:44 AM | I'll get another clear face pic shot and put it up there, minus any female interaction in it. Thanks, if there's anything else please let me know.
But yes - I agree as well the number of men likely far exceeds the number of women. | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 8:16:51 AM | | Looks good now (picture correction pending). Happy fishing. | |
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