| | Doing something wrong?Page 1 of 1 | Hey there, if anyone could cast their eye over my profile it would be greatly appreciated.
Had snippets of success (lot of email convos but most fizzled out/girl stopped replying suddenly) but I'd love to know if I could improve it in anyway. The biography makes me laugh but have a feeling it may not appeal to the vast majority of women! What do you think? | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 2:17:30 PM | Biggs, you are all over the place with the text of your profile. It does start out well (I like the Q&A aspect), but you do need to edit it. You just suddenly stop the Q&A. It may not be a good idea to utilize this format, as it lengthens your profile. It needs to be succinct and humorous.
Your photos are of mediocre quality. You are a good looking chap, so that isn't the issue. Get better photos.
"please give me a massage (message)." ---LOSE THIS.
Best of luck to you. | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 2:19:28 PM | | I liked it. You show a sense of humor. Just SMILE big bro. Teeth and all. Ear to ear! A smile generates hard attraction in women. -Romac | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 2:44:44 PM | | Cheers guys, much appreciated. As for the teethy smile, you know I'm British right..? ;) | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 4:19:37 PM | | LOL! That's funny. But, you can do something about it, right? | |
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Posted: 7/15/2012 6:22:55 PM | | It's funny to me, a lot of people on here will tell others that their profile needs to stand out. Your format definitely stands out, and certain people still won't like it. Umm, more pics. The elephant one is great. | |
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