|All of your pics display you as a drinker/party boy. Many women won't take you seriously. Crop the pic of you and the women - many young women will perceive that as competition.|
wants to date but nothing serious.Equates to; casual sex/NSA/FWB. If that's incorrect, change it.
where I like to hit the bars and nightclubs in the area and London where I can let my party with friends and meet new people.
This confirms what I mention above. Women will think you've a problem with booze.
Include in a couple of lines about the woman you'd like to meet.
Lose the capitals where they're not needed.