| | Wondering If I Can Get An Honest Review Of My ProfilePage 1 of 1 | So I was just wanting to get an honest review of my profile and to see if there are any improvements that I should make to get a few more responses. I know I somewhat **** about not getting the responses I want from my profile but that's directed at the women that say they want a guy like me and then when I message them they take one look at my profile and never send a message back. It just aggravates me because I'm not being fake or hiding anything in my profile.
Hello everyone, so about myself.....these things always get a bit long in my opinion. So I'm 29, I was married once at the age of 20. It didn't work out. I was with my most recent ex for almost 7 years, and we were set to get married several times. But enough about that stuff. I was born in north carolina but raised from the age of 3 in virginia. Virginia is where my entire family lives, I'm here in arizona to make a life for myself and have been doing a pretty good job at it so far. I was in the US Army for almost 4 years where I did 2 tours over seas. I'm good with my hands and love the outdoors. I hunt, fish, camp, and go offroading. I'm currently working full time and going to school full time to become a secondary education history teacher. After that goes on for awhile I hope to get my matters and eventually get into teaching community college and/or work at a history museum. There is alot more to me, but hopefully this is enough to catch your interest.
**Update** 7/11/2012
So I've sent some messages out to a few beautiful and intelligent women on here and have not gotten any responses. I think I may know why. To clear up any hesitation as to you responding to my messages I would like to say that I haven't done this very much and just to break the ice I am continuing the habit of simply sending a message saying "Hey how are you?" It's simple I know and will probably cause you to think that I'm not much for sparking conversation. Well give it a chance, I have a lot more confidence in myself and I am very entertaining.
**Edited Update** 7/13/2012
So I put up another update talking about how there are many women on here that say they want certain things in a man and then when messaged they don't respond. I haven't gotten the response that I had hoped to get from putting that on here. So, as a better way to word this, just be honest in your profile of what you are looking for. I get it if I'm not your type but you might be surprised if you give me a chance.
I have been lucky enough on a few occasions to meet a few women on here. Those meetings have been good,just no spark. | |
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| Wondering If I Can Get An Honest Review Of My Profile
Posted: 7/18/2012 4:19:07 PM | Hi Yotes, here is my input...
Headline does not draw reader in maybe try Up for Adventure?
Profession Leave just your day job do not include company add that you are a student in your about me...
About me" These things get long" makes you sound impatient... delete I was married at twenty simply mark divorced as your status... delete I was with my ex for 7 years... delete I was I was born in NC ... working full time and school full time might make a woman wonder when you would have time.. Here it might be better to say attending ___ pursuing a degree in ___ the goal being___...
you say you posses the qualities that women are looking for ... I am curious what would they be? They should be in your profile... along with some idea with who and what you are looking for...
First date take out the phrase non threatening...
photo's with guns can be off putting...
Send better messages then Hi how are you... many read the message then the profile..
Delete both updates and the last line
Good luck | |
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| Wondering If I Can Get An Honest Review Of My Profile
Posted: 7/18/2012 8:59:18 PM | Photos, photos, photos.
Always start with photos online.
Post eight photos of yourself- no kids, sunglasses, caps, t-shirts, and you should always be smiling. You need one full length body shot and at least one close up. These should be of good quality, colorful and I always advise men to be very well groomed. Women like a man who takes care of himself just like most men prefer a woman who does the same.
Lose the pic of your truck. | |
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