bmt32
| | Joined: 6/10/2012
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| | Ladies, need an honest review of my profile...please help!Page 1 of 1 | | Ladies (guys too), I could really use some help. I need a profile review...I've been messaging ladies I'm interested in but have yet to receive any replies, I'm wondering if my profile sucks or something. So, some honest feedback/criticism would be greatly appreciated. Thanks! | |
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| Ladies, need an honest review of my profile...please help!
Posted: 7/18/2012 8:28:36 PM | | The content of your profile is substantial enough. It is not the neatest profile in terms of clear paragraphs and clear sentences. I have to hold myself back to rewrite them for you. I would say at least divide it up into two or three paragraphs. Nicer on the eyes that way and reads more logical as well. And if you can take things out of paranthesis and make sentences out of them or include it as part of the sentence with proper grammar and sentence structure. You are missing what you are looking for in a girl. Write two or three sentences about the type of girl you are hoping to meet, i.e.; I would love to meet a girl that is x, y, z and who likes, is, wants, x, y, z. | |
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| Ladies, need an honest review of my profile...please help!
Posted: 7/18/2012 8:55:30 PM | Photos, photos, photos.
Always start with photos online.
Post eight photos of yourself- no kids, sunglasses, caps, t-shirts, and you should always be smiling. You need one full length body shot and at least one close up. These should be of good quality, colorful and I always advise men to be very well groomed. Women like a man who takes care of himself just like most men prefer a woman who does the same.
Your profile pic is blurry. | |
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bmt32
| | Joined: 6/10/2012
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