awogg
| | Joined: 4/2/2012
Msg: 1 | |
| | Requesting profile review please.Page 1 of 1 | Hello good people,
I just wanted to request a profile review... I have been on this site off and on and have received maybe 5 responses from people this last time. We would talk about meeting up and then all of a sudden they would completely ignore me, or their profiles would turn up deleted.
So I do not know if I am coming off as a serial killer or too much of an idiot man-child or what... but it's well past coincidence and so now, I turn to you all for help and advice. :-)
Thank you. | |
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| Requesting profile review please.
Posted: 7/28/2012 11:42:42 PM | Just some general recommendations:
1. Interests need changing. Nothing really that appeal to women, besides music and guitar. The ones not highlighted in blue also need to be changed as it means it has no other users having that interest, thus a waste of space and unsearchable.
2. I'm on the fence about that headline. It could be funny, or taken as "OK, but you're still creepy, right?". Know what I mean?
3. Listing TV Shows = No points.
4. Writing a paragraph about Apocalyptica is moot. This profile is about you, not on their awesome Enter Sandman cover where they rocked out in Russia on st... you know what, back to the point.
5. Keep the first date section short. Come off as having a good idea of what to do, or an exact idea of what to do. The more you write, the more "Open to suggestion" you are. Women don't like men without a sense of initiative.
I didn't read the content of your profile (It's late here). Perhaps one of the other gentlemen will help you out. | |
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RT_2
| | Joined: 11/5/2010
Msg: 3 | |
| Requesting profile review please.
Posted: 7/29/2012 7:13:09 AM | | Dated updates aren't necessary. Just add/modify your profile text without saying "update" or giving a day. | |
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