|New Here. Helpful hints welcome.|
Posted: 7/29/2012 5:36:49 AM
|The brutal truth... rewrite the whole thing. Most of it Anyhoo. |
Change your looking for to relationship. Women tend not to like the immediate casual nothing serious thing. Since it says "dating" in the second column, that covers the nothing serious. I mean it could say long term. So, relationship for dating. Because ultimately you want a relationship, but your just dating for now. And you don't need to explain it in the about me section.
List a few movies, music interest, just a handful of each, 4 or so. Say what you like to do in the down time. Hobbies recreation, "I love dirtbiking it gives me a sense of adrenaline packed freedom". Things you like and why you like it.
Need things that women will see and think "I like that too, I would like to learn that"
As much info as you can squeeze in without making it an overwhelming essay like this post is quickly turning in to. Sorry haha.
Even if you have dry humor, add humor to it. At the moment your profile says a whole lot of nothing.
Read some other guys profiles, type up a couple of rough drafts and see what you like the best for structure. We all have varying degrees of success here, and I am certainly no pro at this, but I get a lot of mail on here.