| | What is it?Page 1 of 1 | Ok, I havent got much responses. I think I am a good person and a good catch.
1. which pics do you like the most from 1 to 10.
2. Is it that I am Indian? You know I have been in Florida for most of my life. I think that shouldn't be a reason, but that IS what people notice about me.
3. How am I protraying my self, what do you see of me when reviewing my profile. Once you tell me I cna compare to me. Do I look like a handsome guy, nerd, etc...
I would really lik e your feedback. Thanks Alot. | |
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Posted: 7/29/2012 9:17:42 AM | You need a face shot for your main picture for starters. The one you have currently is too small.
I would change a couple of your captions, labelling them as 'how handsome' and 'what a cutie'? Change that, you come across as arrogant.
Your username..is that meant to be Stallion? If so, change that...women will click off anything like that, immediately!
I don't have time to go into the rest but I have given you a place to start, I hope. | |
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Posted: 7/29/2012 10:07:59 AM | Thaks.
You see I don't really put my photos online, security reasons, unless I like the person, there should be a way to do tthat, or maybe I will mention it in my ad.
2. Arrogant, (it doesnt seem confident, and**** in a joke? as it was meant)? Ok What do you suggest for acptins..
3. I liked the name because: Chocolate (brown like me but sweet and addictive) Stalian (has lots of endurance and looks sleak and strong) hmm I will work on it.
Well thanks alot, anyway. | |
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Posted: 7/29/2012 10:25:31 AM | The answer to your photos question is 2, 5, 7, 8, 6, 4, 1 and 3. Yes you look handsome in photos 2 and 5.
The laundry list part in the first paragraph is annoying and then you say it twice. A lot of what you wrote sounds hostile or at least unfriendly. Sounds like maybe you've met women who were not nice but instead just say things you would like in a woman, not list all the things that annoy you about them.
You have about 10 spelling mistakes. Intelligent women care about that enough to just stop reading (if they made it through your first paragraph).
The reason the other person mentioned your "name" not being good is Stallion is sometimes a slang word to mean a man is well hung. That might not be what you meant.
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Posted: 7/29/2012 10:51:14 AM | Whoa firefly,
Thanks alot! Lotsa good tools.
OK Stallion was meant to be like black Stallion. Like the sleekness of a car for ex.: a 57 Chevy with 400 horse power.
Well hung? Whoa. Well I didn't mean that, but ya I guess that name is true for me too, :) (Hey I am not the one who thought it).
ya i've actually seen alot af J*rks on here, most of the time women DONT respond and others they stop responding, also many have such bad rude things ot say about men. It is painful when I am actually looking for a partner. UGGH. Maybe some men are bad and hurt them but it seems they have a culture to hurt men, but why do they act like that? Thats not nice and all men are nt bad. So I wrote what I did (which was actually longer blasting mean girls but I edited it. Anyway I will change it, thanks. | |
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Posted: 7/30/2012 6:02:38 PM | | Well thank you for all your suggestions. Does anyone else have any suggestions, critiques? | |
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Posted: 8/1/2012 3:28:11 PM | | Would someone please critique my profile, I need some more suggestions please. | |
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Posted: 8/1/2012 3:32:39 PM | | of course youre a handome guy. The question is do YOU think you are handsome it doesn't matter what others think about you. | |
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Posted: 8/2/2012 7:04:26 AM | Hey man thanks alot. I know what you mean I come sccross real unconfident. Hmm I will have to think of your advice for a while it is good.
This is not the first time I though that, but you see I am not that inconfident. I actually am pretty confident, I do alot of things by my self, I am a business owner, and I have courage mre than most people. Maybe I have to work on the selfworth part. Hmm, you see there is a diference. What do you think dude?
Well anyways you see, even if I am the most confident, doesnt matter, almost 99% of "normal" girls on here don't respond. I don' get it, man. What is it?? They are here seeking the same thing I am. Alot even write they "want a gentleman"....Maybe I just am not that stylish or an A***ole enough?? Or maybe I am Indian...? I have had girls tell me my religion would be an issue or I may run off and marry an Indian girl. You know how that feels when someone prejugge you when you did not even think of doing something like that???? | |
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| What is it? (Females, please help I need some advice) Thanks
Posted: 8/3/2012 5:24:59 AM | Well, I made some changes, please tell me your view point of this profile and any changes I should make.
Every little bit helps thank you sooo much for your time, I can review yours in return if you wish.
PS. Don't worry, I am thick skinned so the stronger you critique, the better. | |
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Posted: 8/16/2012 5:53:46 PM | Yes, it's looking good. Use either the 2nd or 3rd photo as the main one. The current one with the other man is just too blurry and it's better to be alone in the photo anyway.
I don't know what to tell you about the race thing. I'm old and while I am nice to people of any race, I have only ever dated men of my same race. However, I think it is much different now for younger people. Maybe it partly has to do with tv? When I was growing up I only watched shows which showed all white people. Then after a while, new shows came on with all black people. Now some of the things I watch, which I realize are geared to younger people. show a good mixture of everyone. It doesn't make me uncomfortable to see mixed races. There have been times that I would have dated specific men who happened to be another race, if they had been single. But when I look online (do a search) I do only search for those of my own race. On here it seems that you can only search for one race at a time. Gotta admit I've never done a search for other specific races, maybe I should sometime. Sure am running out of all the blond and blue bearded men on here!
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| What is it? (Females, please help I need some advice) Thanks
Posted: 8/16/2012 5:54:16 PM | Yes, it's looking good. Use either the 2nd or 3rd photo as the main one. The current one with the other man is just too blurry and it's better to be alone in the photo anyway.
I don't know what to tell you about the race thing. I'm old and while I am nice to people of any race, I have only ever dated men of my same race. However, I think it is much different now for younger people. Maybe it partly has to do with tv? When I was growing up I only watched shows which showed all white people. Then after a while, new shows came on with all black people. Now some of the things I watch, which I realize are geared to younger people. show a good mixture of everyone. It doesn't make me uncomfortable to see mixed races. There have been times that I would have dated specific men who happened to be another race, if they had been single. But when I look online (do a search) I do only search for those of my own race. On here it seems that you can only search for one race at a time. Gotta admit I've never done a search for other specific races, maybe I should sometime. Sure am running out of all the blond and blue bearded men on here!
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