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 LUCKS4U2
Joined: 7/19/2010
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I appreciate any advice, especially from a man's point of view. One thing I know that needs improvement is my pics. They are all terrible mirror pics. Not one shows me out doing activities. I need to make a point to take some. I hope I sound direct in what I am searching for, without sounding "all that". Plus a guy friend of mine told me it was too long and that men's attention spans are short...lol Well, I want a man who can read and pay me a lot of attention soooo...
Thanks!
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
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Posted: 8/3/2012 9:02:55 AM
Wow this is actually a tough one,but the only problem that I can see is that maybe with you being divorced could be the factor as no man wants to be involved with the drama of the ex-husband.You should mention in your profile how often the ex-husband is in your life or if you done away with for good,because the way i see if you are on a date and the ex shows that will cause the date to end and he bails
 LUCKS4U2
Joined: 7/19/2010
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Posted: 8/3/2012 9:17:06 AM
Ahh...ok thanks for that info...never thought of that. The EX lives 1,000 miles away ...in another country...so zero problem there. ;D Why else is it a "tough one"?
 firefly416
Joined: 1/27/2009
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Posted: 8/3/2012 9:21:37 AM
Well, I'm a woman so I loved it! I bet most men will say it's too long. I tend to never contact a man first unless he writes as much as you do. The only thing I'd change is to move that paragraph which is currently below your First Date to the end of the regular part. And if you decided some tattoos are okay (must have seen one you liked?) then delete the part that says you didn't want them.

I loved the JB song lyrics. Yeah, I'm straight and don't want to meet you ha ha.

Firefly
 PaceFace
Joined: 7/28/2012
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Posted: 8/3/2012 9:23:46 AM
Yeah, I really can't see you having any problem finding dates on here lol
 ^campfires^
Joined: 4/24/2012
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Posted: 8/3/2012 10:13:37 AM
Length is fine.

Work on pics.
<-- click my History for my pic guidelines.

Delete:
*Honestly, if you can't, or won't read a longer profile then we won't be a match~
Negativity does not belong in a profile. Never say anything like "won't be a match" or "move on".

The MM quotes are way overused on here. You don't need them for length or content.

Keep Fishing!
 LUCKS4U2
Joined: 7/19/2010
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Posted: 8/3/2012 10:47:56 AM
Thanks for the info. MM is just my fave! I agree about the negativity....it is a turn off when I read profiles. I was just venting I suppose.
 Skyfireshogun
Joined: 5/6/2010
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Posted: 8/3/2012 5:34:57 PM
Pictures aside, that about me is seriously mixed up. Brevity isn't one of your strong suits. It needs a lot of editing. Seems like you didn't automatically edit your own profile at all. When it comes to profiles being concise and ordered is important. Mixed up just leaves people confused. I'm confused.
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