| just a thread of my work
Posted: 8/1/2005 11:56:35 PM | | i really wouldnt call myself a poet, but i do have some writings that have sat and collected virtual dust, ok a bad joke about them being stored on my computer, anyway im not posting them to be criticized so pls keep it at a minimum. id just rather not have this thread fill up with a bunch of "good one" or "that sucks". i personally dont care whether ppl like them or not, i would be however curious as to how ppl interpret some of them so feel free. | |
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| Tears
Posted: 8/1/2005 11:57:08 PM | when days are numbered
and nights are long
panick is rising
fear is strong
a single drop of water
can right all wrongs
the reflection of life
the cradle of birth
the power of death
the blood of the earth
in the beginning
it was the first
to cleanse the surface
it falls from the sky
to cleanse a soul
it falls from an eye
so valuable to waste
and still i cry... | |
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| I
Posted: 8/1/2005 11:58:05 PM | i dont know
i cant care
i need love
i wouldnt dare
i want life
i get death
i would try
i must confess | |
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| Life
Posted: 8/2/2005 12:01:20 AM | the winds of fate sing songs of sorrow
emptiness fills the heart thats hollow
restless sleep wreak the dread of tomorrow
dreams of euphoria shall not follow
on this day my heart doth moan
the suns does rise but light not shown
an icy crystal incased in bone
longing for a touch, touched by none
the spirit concedes strenghth diminished
withered and worn all but finished
struggling precariously nothing accomplished
the beat has stopped the breath hath vanished | |
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| I
Posted: 8/2/2005 2:01:39 AM | | I think they're awesome, walkergann. Keep it up! | |
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| For your eyes
Posted: 8/2/2005 10:49:46 AM | A wild flower withered, struggling winter
Fighting death, silent and somber
For your eyes are the sun
Inspiriation to conquer
The warmth of love, in which all relish
Crystal orbs, your body embellished
For your eyes are the light
That make angels jealous
Without distinction, race or creed
Without corruption, hate or greed
For your eyes represent the glory
In which evil will flee
Comforting and peaceful
Intelligent, respectful
For your eyes reflect your soul
Which makes you more beautiful | |
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| just saying
Posted: 8/2/2005 11:03:25 AM | | ill try and post one a day as long as anyone is interested. ill only really know this by replys. yes i did ask to keep the criticism at a minimun but feel free to comment analyze interpret or even put up a similiar poem to compare and contrast. im really interested if my words can and will touch other ppl. people sharing similiar life experiences. at how close two writting inspired by similiar experiences comparing in the expression of feeling. or even as questions whatever. i mainly just didnt want million posts of "i like it" or "i dont like it" crowding up the thread. | |
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