| well i wanted a rate thread focused on me =p
Posted: 10/23/2005 11:49:06 PM | | lol, honestly im not real good with words. and i was curious if my profile in anyway has elements to turn ppl away. i really have no idea what i should include in my profile or how to put it the info i do include. so simply i would like anyones opinion on how it is and how it can be made better. ok thanks for your time and ill be looking for your replies. | |
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| well i wanted a rate thread focused on me =p
Posted: 10/24/2005 12:05:21 AM | Well, your profile did at least have more than the token "Hey ladies, holla atcha boi". You have plenty to say. I know Im not a lady, but wth... its late and Im bored. So heres my two cents...
The first part sounds like your writting a letter to your aunt across the country. If it were just a random profile gazing, it doesnt sound like your writting to potential buyers, just your aunt. And the only other thing is, you apologize a bit for the things you really enjoy doing. Why? If your looking for someone that YOU can enjoy... its much easier when she gets to talk to you and know you... not who you think she will enjoy.
Okay, thats my two cents. But like I said, congrats on slinging some words out there though. A lot better than most.
Good luck brotha! | |
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| well i wanted a rate thread focused on me =p
Posted: 10/24/2005 12:45:20 AM | | hey man thanks a lot, i just changed the whole profile based on some tips i got off another thread. if you dont mind lemme know if its better now. | |
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| well i wanted a rate thread focused on me =p
Posted: 10/24/2005 12:56:18 AM | Ya your good to go hun... But put your third picture as your main one... and I get the last one, no BS.. funny, but does everyone get it?maybe put a note of it in there... like.. If you don't get i, it means i dont' want no BS...
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| well i wanted a rate thread focused on me =p
Posted: 10/24/2005 1:20:33 AM | | alrighty done thanks a bunch for the imput. i thought about putting that pic as main but the other was clearer, though i know its not that great a pic lol. | |
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