| I think I am ready, profile review, please
Posted: 11/8/2005 5:33:57 PM | | After just getting a very rude IM that said "Get rid of the Glam shots those aren't you" I guess I am as ready as I ever will be to be reviewed. But upfront I will say the Glam shots were the most recent ones and am working on more new ones that do reflect me. The glam shots were fun and do reflect my personality. So review away.... will be hiding behind my teddy bear.... | |
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| I think I am ready, profile review, please
Posted: 12/1/2006 4:25:15 PM | | Hi, I'm relatively new to this... but I am an amateur photographer and I thought your glamour shots were cute. My favorite picture is you holding the bottle of pop. If I were you I would crop it and use it that way, just a suggestion. Good Luck… | |
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| I think I am ready, profile review, please
Posted: 12/1/2006 6:19:48 PM | Well, overall it's pretty good. It flows and is easy to read. That being said, here are the problems!(Oh come on, you knew that was coming!*L*)
I believe that it has the tone that you want it to but I don't know if I would include the word dominating. Can be a little scary for our male counter parts. Also I find you're first date section way too long. It's for the First date, not second or third or anything about future dates there after. The main problem I find is how you started right off the bat with your stipulations about pics. I'm not saying take it out, don't re-word it if you don't want to, but move the placement. I think it would do much better near the end instead of the being. I think it sets the wrong tone in the being. It's funny but not at the begining. Just my opinion.
Good luck to you | |
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