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Posted: 12/9/2005 9:56:48 AM | | Someone please rate my profile and see what I can do to help it out... thanks. | |
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Posted: 12/9/2005 11:18:52 AM | First off your profile is full of grammar errors. You even misspelled "with" in your headline. Definitely do a spell check and fix your run-on sentences.
The pic that is sideways makes no sense. Get rid of it. It isn't much different than the other ones and it is going to make people strain their eyes.
You mention that you like to watch sports. Well, so do I, but unfortunately most women don't give a damn about sports. This would be good for your interest section, but not in the written part of the profile.
You also start a list of interest in the middle of the "about me" section. Leave that for the interest section. Use the about me section to get personal. Try to show women why you are different than the other 50 guys who e-mail them each day.
Good Luck out there!! | |
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Posted: 12/9/2005 5:11:08 PM | Lost prophet is rite to many run on sentences,this is not a race.Take your time,get your thoughts straight,then convey them.The substanance was good,tells people who you are and what you have to offer.But take a little time and word it better.mustride | |
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Posted: 12/9/2005 8:11:24 PM | | This could be fun, rate mine too pls. It does well with responses but another opinion is always appreciated, especially if it was from a woman :) | |
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Posted: 12/9/2005 9:12:26 PM | | haha! steve, your profile is interesting. i like the outdoors pictures and the full body shot. You're really 40? Coulda fooled me. My profile is a chaotic mess. I've gotten a large number of responses to it though. | |
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Posted: 12/9/2005 9:31:00 PM | | Lost the with was cause it was too long just fixed it though and took out watching sports and fixed the errors thanks.. | |
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Posted: 12/9/2005 11:33:49 PM | raidefan24:
The profile looks much better. I'm glad I could help. There is still a problem with the head line. You have written: looking for a nice women to hang with. Women is the plural of woman. I think want you are meaing to say here is: "looking for a nice woman to hang out with". | |
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Posted: 12/10/2005 8:44:27 AM | TY aier,
I like your profile, the chaos makes it fun!!!! :)
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Posted: 12/10/2005 11:31:05 AM | Hey though, the truth is if your a woman you just need a nice pic. You could write you are a B#@tch, who is emotionally unstable, but it you have a good picture, here come the e-mails!! | |
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Posted: 12/10/2005 5:39:01 PM | Thanks agian fixed it and yes thats true for women but I think is you looked like Arnold lol I think the same would be true but I dont so..... | |
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Posted: 12/10/2005 6:22:04 PM | Other than a few grammar mistakes, a need for some comma's and periods, you did a good job. Good luck! Kasey.  | |
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Posted: 12/10/2005 8:13:57 PM | Mustride
prophet is rite to many run on sentences
Dude, I just don’t think you should be handing out advice on grammar.
Prophet is right too many. | |
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Posted: 12/10/2005 8:39:48 PM | | pun-kin did mine, she said change the heading. | |
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