| Will your guys tell me what you think of my profile ??
Posted: 1/12/2006 12:39:53 AM | well its been Months and still No Luck is there something I am not sayin on my profile or is there just something wrong with being a Big girl lookin for someone to spend her time with??? | |
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| Will your guys tell me what you think of my profile ??
Posted: 1/12/2006 5:41:34 AM | I agree,
Get picts with you smilling and remove those where you're not.
don't mention that you haven't had any succes in your profile... that will drive them away.
Stay positive and avoid negative statements, there are a few in your profile.
Define your interests. You say you're into your culture, how does that translate in your daily life.
Have fun! | |
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| Will your guys tell me what you think of my profile ??
Posted: 5/8/2006 12:41:10 PM | hmmmm Rox... change your pics- smile- ... ohhhhh...
are you tryin to LOOK pouty? alluring? (ya.... change pics).
if at first you dont suceed... try try again... (sigh) one day- it'll happen. | |
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| Will your guys tell me what you think of my profile ??
Posted: 5/8/2006 2:45:00 PM |
! HEY EVERYONE!!
First off I would like to say I have been at this a lil while and it seems that I am not dangling the right bait LOL jk Anyway Guys I am a fun loving and happy person I am a girl that likes to be out and about meeting new people. I dont wanna miss lead anyone and I dont like to be mislead either I am a real Woman with real feelings and would like to meet someone with a good grip on reality and a awsome sence of humor well with that said I would have to be goin LOL
nisgaa_angel011@.com also feel free to check out my site at http://nisgaaangelsworl.piczo.com It's all about me baby.
Im not sure you should publish in your opening sentence that you arent dangling the right bait, as in getting no response. First, why does a new reader need or want to know that? second, when was the last commercial you saw that opened with "Our sales are still at zero"?
Fun loving and happy, a girl that likes to be out and about. Good. What fun do you love? horse shoes? scuba diving? fireworks displays? sports events? move it from the generic to the specific. I would say few of us would state, "I am not funloving" the point is, we all are. Attract your guy by saying what is fun to you. You know how many people go into the gas station when its a hundred fifteen outside JUST to open the freezer door and breathe in? I read that once and said wow, I do that, I want to meet her.
Delete "I dont want to mislead anyone or be mislead, its again, what we all feel.
You say you are a real woman, as opposed to what, an unreal one? What were you thinking when you wrote that, that is what is important, for example, you dont you dont smile and tell someone how glad to se them when they just set fire to your house? Wont suck up to the boss to get ahead? How are you real? dont say you're real, describe yourself in real terms, but again, specifically. You do this to attract the interested and weed out the uninterested. You love the beach and some guy reading your profile lost his daughter or his own leg to a shark attack, its probable that he isnt going to respond. And if he does, dont rent that cottage on the beach for the summer.
Want a sense of humor in your prospective guy, tell a joke or say something funny, if they get you, they will reply.
I really dont care for reading things like "I never know what to say" or "I hate this part" or "Well, Im busy now and going" in a profile. I dont want to know that stuff before Ive met you, I want to know what makes you tick, what makes you laugh, what makes you happy.
writing a profile isnt drudge, sit down and have a good time telling about yourself. sont worry what they think, they dont like it, they wouldnt be there anyway, but someone will, and thats the guy you are looking for anyway. You are only talking to one man, you just dont know who he is, tell him how you are. | |
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Joined: 10/18/2006
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| Will your guys tell me what you think of my profile ??
Posted: 11/4/2006 1:37:48 AM | Hi to all the nice guys out there, this is my first time writing to a site like this .......
I'm 48 years old:  I look good for my wonderful age.
I'm a widow , I have a good job , good sense of humor, down to earth women , love having smart conversations,I like good music, friends,good wine over a nice homemade meal.........
want to know more about me ? write me. 
CECILLE | |
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| Will your guys tell me what you think of my profile ??
Posted: 2/3/2007 2:25:51 AM | I think that you should list the kind of man that you are looking for, and what kind of relationship that you want. Also list the things that you like to do. There should be no guessing as to the klind of woman you are, and who you are looking for. I would make sure that my language is correct and clear. Good Luck. | |
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| Will your guys tell me what you think of my profile ??
Posted: 2/3/2007 3:35:31 AM | Seems I got to see it after revisions... and they may not have been good ones.
The "gangsta" hand gestures will get you gang member responses. They will also make a lot of people click right on past.
You need more interests, and the pair that got joined need to be separated with a comma. If the interest does not turn blue it doesn't help the search feature.
Too much "I'm not" in the about me section. Try to phrase things in positive terms. Negativity is a turn off. | |
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| Will your guys tell me what you think of my profile ??
Posted: 2/3/2007 5:46:50 AM | I suggest that you remove the negative words "hootchie" and "playette" and list positive traits/values/goals instead.
Saying that you are not a "run of the mill native woman" sounds offensive.
State how unique you are instead. | |
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| Will your guys tell me what you think of my profile ??
Posted: 2/3/2007 9:37:48 AM | | Just take a deep breath... write down what you are attracted too, what creates chemistry... and what stirs your soul (if not a few hobbies). I personally like the humor "hootchie" "playette" run of the mill even... don't worry about the Miss Thistlebottom's on POF dearie... just LQQK at how many threads they respond to LOL and like they say, a pic is worth a thousand words. Be sincere and share what has grabbed you since childhood? 3 things that have meant something to your time and efforts over the years? ~Uzi~ | |
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