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Posted: 2/22/2006 1:23:20 PM | Dear Lizbets,
You are an intelligent, beautiful woman who clearly knows how to attract men. Please tell me how I can improve my profile so that men will eat out of my hand... and so I can get on 500 favorites' lists too.
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Posted: 2/22/2006 1:51:45 PM | MsAnn,
There is NO way I could do your profile justice! You are an articulate, wise and very funny blob. But I agree you do have a problem... seeing as you are a single celled organism, I think having men eat out of your hand may be a bit beyond you! Surely there must be a tall, dark and handsome protozoa floating around out there who would LOVE to join nuclei with you?? That's the best I can do with my 8th grade biology!
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Posted: 2/22/2006 2:07:23 PM | Ok Freshest...
You are a young, good looking guy so how about a couple of better pics.. up close and smiling! Photos DO help sell profiles, so give us your best smile.
You need to do a spell check. There are quite a few spelling errors and there are quite a few women who find that a bit of a turn off. Right or wrong, thats just the way it is.. especially since you are a university student!
Take out the line
I'm not really sure what I am doing here. Well, that's a lie; I know why I am here. It really doesnt need to be said and it's just a space filler. You haven't said what you are looking for in a woman. What is your idea of the "perfect" woman for you?? And how about a first date idea?? What can you come up with that will have a woman knocking your door down for a date?
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go F*&^ yourself is supposed to be funny, but.. it might not be workin' for ya! I would take that out.
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Posted: 2/22/2006 2:57:57 PM | Hi ruthless, i took the liberty of changing up somethings in your profile. keep what you like
I consider myself a fun-loving character that seems to cheer people up and is a regular antidote for people with problems. People say I am easy to speak to because I am not judgemental and I always seem to know the right answers. I am always smiling and try to see each new day as a challenge. I love trying new things, I am often quite spontaneous. My passion is music and spinning records. I love the buzz it gives me and I do not know what I would do without music.
I am looking for to meet like minded people for a chat and a giggle. Maybe even learn a thing or two. I do not have a web cam and I'm not into cyber sex. So just skip this profile if that’s what your after. However, if you are still interested in getting to know me then drop me a line and we can chat...till then.... | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:04:26 PM | Freshest,
Yes.. much better. I would still like to see a bit more about what you are looking and a first date idea.. but it is MUCH better than your first try!
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:06:10 PM | Lizbit, got a couple of questions. Thnx again for smacking me around and giving me profile advice. Anyways;
1. I have a rather large tat on my ribs and a pic of it on my prof. While I know it will chase away the girls that don't dig ink, that's just as well since I'm heavily tattooed anyways. But as for girls that like or are indifferent about tats, does it make me look like I'm just thowing it out there to show it off (although I guess I am.) I guess the question is, does it make me look shallow?
2. I have long term on my What I Want or whatever it is. Do you think that will scare girls off? BTW long term really is what I'm looking for, I'm not one of those guys who puts that because he can't put one-nighter on there. | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:09:14 PM | Cugin,
Very nice pleasant profile from a seemingly very nice pleasant young man! I dont see anything wrong with your profile. If I was nit-picky (which I try not to be!), I would say that I like the brighter pic (with the white t-shit) as your main pic.. but it would be even nicer if you were smiling.
The fact that you don't drive may be a bit of a problem.. but other than that I think you are off to a good start.
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:10:51 PM | | Steel...love your ink it's awesome!! Could not private message you to say, as I am too old! | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:14:47 PM | Ruthless,
I like your profile. A couple of suggestions... You dont say what you are looking for in a man. Can you describe what kind of guy you like? Also.. use your imagination and come up with a first date idea that will get his attention. And speaking of getting attention.. a couple more pics of you... just YOU, rather than in a group would be nice. Personally I would take out the reference to webcam, cyber sex stuff. Stating this in your profile will not dissuade the freaks from contacting you.. it's better to just ignore, delete and block them.
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:19:27 PM | Cheers Lizbets ,you are one cool chick! Thanks for the advice and I really appreciate you taking the time to review my profile. I wish you all the best! | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:22:20 PM | Steel,
1) Personally I love tattoos (I have one). I don't think it makes you look shallow at all. As you said, girls that are into ink will appreciate it's beauty and those who aren't ... well... they aren't for you! What I find WAY more shallow is the guys who think we all want to see their 6-packs or 4 packs.. or whatever-packs.  A Tattoo is a very personal statement about you and I think it's cool to show it off.
2) If you are looking for long-term then what's wrong with stating it? Again, the girls who would be scared off by that aren't right for you anyway!
I think you will do fine... ohh and I forgot to say, the fact that you want to be a vet should have all those women who love their pets flocking (pardon the pun) to your door! | |
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:33:58 PM | OK Liz
I'm fairly new at all this online stuff. Keep in mind that I probably am looking for a different sort of friendship/relationship experience than many on here due to being recently single after a long time, and having kids in my life.
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:37:41 PM | lalby,
After I read your profile I had to go back and check your age because you sound like someone much younger than 28. Not that there's anything wrong with that, I guess it depends on what you are looking for and the age/type of guy you want to attract. Your writing is sloppy, spelling, grammar and punctuation wrong or missing. If none of this is important to you or to who you want to attract then I guess you don't need to change anything. Otherwise, cut and paste into Word and fix it up a bit before re-posting.
Again, I would delete any reference to the freaks who are messaging you, as I think this only encourages them. It's better to just block them.
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Posted: 2/22/2006 3:58:07 PM | Hi J.,
You sound like a great guy and your profile is well-written and honest. The only thing I would say is that some women may be hesitant due to your statement "family man for a very long time and now suddenly single".. it may be construed as you are on the re-bound. I don't know if you are or not, but maybe think about changing that line.
If you could add a something about the kind of woman you hope to attract I think that would round out your already pretty nice profile!
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