| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/12/2006 7:52:46 PM | Hello All,
New to this fishing game and was hoping that some of you could take a moment and rate my profile for me...would love an honest response to the text and pictures...any suggestions would be helpful and very much appreciated. Thanks and good luck fishing :) | |
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| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/12/2006 8:11:20 PM | Hi,
Here is my humble 2 cents worth.
Keep pics 1,3, 5 and the last one. They are great pics of you.
Eliminate all the negatives in your profile- too much like whining and complaining and doesn't keep away what you want except for the desirables actually. I think it was mostly at the start and end. As well, edit... some of the words and logic aren't the best text you can use - mostly in the first paragraph.
As well, there are 3 or 4 other pros who can and will review here...
Now then, if you don't want meat hooks, highlight your wonderful qualities in your profile name, pics and about you...
Good luck...
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Posted: 7/12/2006 8:13:09 PM | You are a very beautiful woman with great pics. Love the way you are upfront and a no nonsense lady. You expressed yourself quite well and loved the touches of humour. By the way loved your opening line. Good Profile
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| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/14/2006 10:59:05 PM | Hi Lenore,
Yes, I agree with Riley. Great profile - well expressed - funny, cute, honest, assertive, fun and you have the important qualities that count. AND YOU PLAY VIDEO GAMES! Guys, it doesn't get any better than this! I'm very new to this scene myself and I am curious Sexy - how much response have you had?
Now, you need to read my profile. I know it's not really much of a profile - I just wrote what I was thinking. But I did it two days ago and I still don't have one response! Dammit! :D
Best,
Ron | |
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| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/14/2006 11:17:23 PM |
I am secure in who I am and what I do.
Most people who proclaim that to the world, usually aren't. Just a suggestion.
Otherwise, your profile is pretty awesome. Love the humor. | |
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Posted: 7/17/2006 8:08:54 PM | Hi Ron,
Thanks for taking the time to read my profile. I checked out your profile and liked what I read but I am a little different than most girls out there so I could see some red flags that may be detering some of your would be viewers......the opening line...As a woman...not interested in a stubborn **stard...a flexible goat maybe....Also....you should take out the stuff about not dating for the last five years...implies 2 things- 1) you are picky and 2) makes me think why not? Even though you explain it...I think that you should leave out the why and wherefors. Your profile already discloses your history-you are divorced...that's enough for now in regards to previous relationships and you can explain your dating history once you meet the people in person. I like the cat stuff by the way...and I guess..taking a dose of my own medicine and something I need to remove from my own profile -is the I know who I am stuff....not that I don't...geez....you'd think that after all the work I have done that I could at least say that but I realize how arrogant it sounds. Knowing yourself is about dissolving the ego so I too, will be eliminating that from my profile. As for how many people have checked me out....about 20 and I have been online for about a month or so. I got a lot of hits at first but that was before I put up the blocks from the intimate encouters, hang outs and married people. Since then...what I can say is that the people I have met in person have been lovely, genuine and great people. So I wish you good luck and patience...the right fish will come along soon :)
Best,
Lenore. | |
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| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/17/2006 9:01:43 PM | Haha! Damn and I just added that part! You see it used to start with the third paragraph about "Never had a date in my life" but I realized that that's what shows up in the blurb for the thumbnail list when people do a search. So it made me sound like such a loser - like "what are you the 40 yr old virgin"? LOL. So I had to fill in something at the beginning - and someone did recently tell me I was a stubborn **stard (but this was about a matter of principle and personal sacrifice, not concerning someone else or a relationship). Oh well, I guess there has to be a compromise between what I feel like saying and what people will understand from it. Back to the drawing board. Well at least I'm getting to know MYSELF better. :D
I have will have to get your opinion again though.
Best,
Ron | |
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| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/18/2006 8:27:18 PM | Ron,
Not that I have any answers..but how about something like this....
I found this site from a google search for "silica", and right now I can't confront doing my taxes ...so here I am! I am new to internet dating, but I admit this is really interesting. I am interested in people, and would love to get a message from a strange girl that feels like reaching out - "strange" as in someone I don't know yet, not "strange" as in someone weird. Though actually, I guess weird is okay too. Who knows, maybe I'll find my long lost lover from two lifetimes ago. Honey, if you are reading this ...where the hell have you been?! ...And are you still hot?
Hm, well something about me... I'm one of the good guys. My life is sometimes happy, exciting, sometimes crazy busy, and sometimes peaceful. Right now its crazy busy but I am willing to make the time to get to know that special someone. Looking for that beautiful woman who inspires me to be a better man.
What do I want? To get in touch with new people, try some new things and hopefully, make some great friends along the way. I'll talk with anyone about anything. I find it harder (not impossible) to relate to shallow, superficial people because my sense of humour seems to fly over their heads :)
Nervousness is okay, even some insecurity, as long as you realize that deep down inside, you are really a star. Send me a hello or more, I would love to hear from you! | |
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Joined: 5/26/2006
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| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/18/2006 8:55:25 PM | She Said: Look into my eyes.
He said: I am, I am, Iam, I am, I am..........
She Said (to herself): Now I have him in my complete control.
Honestly though, what beautiful eyes. We must know who gave them to you...Mom, Dad, grandma? | |
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| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/18/2006 9:05:42 PM | Hey! That's great! I love it!
But I don't know if it's all true. Let me see...
Damn, that's a good point you caught - you really saw that I am not stating much intention to find someone and make the time hunh?
You know the thing is, I haven't fully wrapped my head around actually going on dates from this thing (hence the Email/Talk status). Still feels strange to me. Though I am positive I would get more replies with these changes. I just don't want to say anything that isn't really true. I mean I might get flooded with requests for dates and I would have to feel bad for the girls when I turn them all down. 
Okay, I can use some parts that are true. Let me copy and paste this in a text file. I'll have to consider what it is that I am really after here.
Hey, did you notice I put up new pics? You should read the flaming I got on the "What's wrong with the profile above" thread (page 12 on).
Thanks Sexy! Message me anytime!
Best,
Ron
PS. My profile used to say "I AM A FLEXIBLE GOAT." since your last message. But you took too long to look at it so I had to change it back before too many people thought I was some kind of weirdo. :D | |
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| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/19/2006 11:39:29 AM | Thanks for the compliment...and as for where they came from...Grandma on both sides I believe as both my parents have brown eyes....either that or I came from the mail man even though my mother still insits after all these years that I didn't :).
Have a great day and maybe we will chat soon.
Lenore. | |
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| Would love an honest rating of my profile please :)
Posted: 7/19/2006 11:49:38 AM | | I love picture #6. But there are so many things you asked from a man, that chances are it'll be difficult to find. There's a nice description of you, and if evrything you say about you is 100% true you shouldn't have any problems. Me, I would like someone with just a couple of good things. Let me find out the rest. | |
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