Well, your main pic cuts off your chin and the PoF logo obscures more of your face. I'd say you need more pics and should consider deleting that one for those reasons.
someone who looks on the bright side of life.in good health, and no facial hair please. also someone who likes to grill and eat outdoors occasionally. I love a nice smile. and someone who likes to cuddle, and show public affection. Go for a walk holding hands. Maybe playing a little golf. Or going for a swim.
This is very choppy. I thought at first you were saying YOU are someone who looks on the bright side, but then it seems that's what you're looking for.
You've focused entirely on what you want, and what you want to do, without telling us anything about yourself. Is facial hair really a dealbreaker? If you found someone really great? I'd leave it out unless it's a total requirement.
Try rewriting this as though it's a story, a story about who you are and who the companion is you'd like to meet. There's also a "profile writing tips" thread at the top of this forum to give you more ideas. http://forums.plentyoffish.com/datingPosts1262627.aspx
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