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Lets try to avoid the problems of Rebellious Amishes brilliant thread
by reading our own posts after we've written them
and if someone beat you to it just hit your back button
and change your first line ,or edit to make the change
this isn't hard just polite ,lets see if this one works
YOUR FIRST LINE MATCHES THE PREVIOUS POSTS LAST LINE
AND YOUR REPLY IS AN EIGHT LINE STANZA...{ask if you're not sure} | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 9:08:34 AM | Better pick your favorite colour girl
best to get your vote in tune
did you find some second guessing darlin
has the time swallowed up your shoes
are you back to first impressions love
now that you've scoped out the mood
it's a mission in mortality kitten
and you've got to pick it real soon | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 9:21:30 AM | You've got to pick it real soon
Or you'll get the wooden spoon?
That takes me back to childrens times'
But I came here to swoon
It seems my stanzas dont work well
Im not so good at rhyme
I never was (cept somethings luv)
Any good at keepin thyme | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 9:33:07 AM | Any good at keepin thyme
the spice of life or sign of times
they don't really have to rhyme
the purpose is to repeat the line
and you did it well my Salty friend
without the need to edit or mend
impressive I say and kudos I send
theres nothing there for you to defend | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 9:45:53 AM | Theres nothing there for you to defend
So walk away, you cannot mend
That fence.
Defense
Does not serve you nor wish you well
Swell
In service to divine principals still
Will
You let go now?
How shall you go on when love has turned to hate?
Too late,
You look back and see
That the road not traveled will remain
a mystery. | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 10:11:05 AM | the road not traveled will remain a mystery
as u gaze at it so far away
desperately wanting to to go
but desperately afraid
life is made up of chances
take then while u can
if u get broken along along the way
its OK u will mend
but not to take the risk
is the worse mistake of all
if u happen to stumble
don't worry i will catch u when u fall
so travel to that distant land
go to it for yourself
hold your head up high
try not to self doubt
for u are worth so much
more than shinny yellow gold
so hurry go see whats out there
before life starts to mold......you | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 11:01:43 AM | before life starts to mold......
you hurry to the fold
and take your shelter there
because you truly care
a fence? a guy sells stolen stuff?
I think my friend he's had enough
Its bedtime now for me you see
But first of all I'll take a ......look at the stars | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 8 | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 1:35:04 PM | I'll take a look at the stars
along the milky lights
as I travel across the universe
on planetary nights
dreaming in colorful rainbows
reveling in romance
blowing the way the wind blows
welcoming hapenstance | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 4:15:16 PM | welcoming hapenstance
greeting a random chance
a twist for your future plans
or missing it all completely
who are we to say
about some sunny day
we don't even know the way
or we missed it all completely | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 10 | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 4:39:01 PM | we missed it all completly
tucked away so neatly
our true feelings were predated
feeble and overrated
who were we trying to fool
what did we hope to acomlplish
we should reflect in the pool
and pick out another goldfish | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 5:19:20 PM | pick out another goldfish
then put it in the cats dish
now make a last fish wish
and let the cat out of the bag
come on its only for a laugh
the fish would never last
but wouldn't it be a blast
to let your dad out of the closet | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 12 | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 6:50:24 PM | let your dad out of the closet
he's been stuck in there for a week
he must be damn near starved by now
the poor man can hardly speak
let your mom out of the closet
she's worn out dear ole dad
if you let your dad out of the closet
your poor mom would be so sad | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 7:00:18 PM | your poor mom would be so sad
missin the leg of that dirty old man
woke up this morning with tears in her ears
stayed up all night shooting skreetch and beer
found herself just a little bit over the line
and we all been there from time to time
but this times different than ever before
this time my son daddys not comin home | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 7:23:51 PM | this time my son daddys not comin home
i boiled him with carrots, down to the bone
wishing wouldn't make him leave me alone
so off to the bighouse i go
he pushed and pulled, i pushed back
take it from me, i'm a damn good hack
he left this world singin' "She's got the Jack"
it's the only way to blow | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 7:40:53 PM | its the only way to blow
and I'm in the know
I'll attack from the back
you get it from below
that'll fix the fukker
when it starts to grow
I'll give him your regards
and say you said hello | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 7:48:27 PM | say you said hello to me
that maybe i missed it
like that time i trained a tiger
then he jumped when i kissed it
he wasn't really expecting
my lips on his silky fur
he wouldn't have been so angry
if he knew what my intentions were! | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 7:56:40 PM | he knew what my intentions were
thats why you could hear the purr
I could use some speaking in tongues
puff up my head as well as my lungs
try it sometime you might find it fun
a little ripple here a stoke across the bum
and if you think you've had it all done
a little lick of kitty never hurt no one | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 8:01:36 PM | a little lick of kitty never hurt no one
aw-naw, hell naw, sure is fun!
when you have a purring, luring friend
who can take you there, by way of pen
a little kiss here, a pet-pet there
soon kitty's dripping everywhere
drooling from the mouth, panting heavy
in the back of my '69 chevy | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 8:09:50 PM | in the back of my 69 Chevy
I got nothing in return
and gave up plenty
shoulda checked her pedigree
with a twinkle in her eye
and toes aimed at the sky
I had my own little look see
at my fresh shaved chickadee | |
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Posted: 10/19/2006 8:12:54 PM | yum yum fresh shaved chickadee
ready for the stew, made for me
wonder what she's thinkin, bein so free
to show off her habitual findings
maybe she's thinkin about peepshows
and the one that needs, has the know
to come as he may, blow by blow
and soft leather is best for binding | |
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Posted: 10/20/2006 12:14:28 PM | soft leather is best for binding
has less stretch and more deciding
and thats all about your choices
things heard from comparative voices
hard times ahead for two lovers
so much for the lessened listen
funny how they found the paradox
when they thought they were just fishin | |
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Posted: 10/20/2006 2:19:50 PM | funny how they found the para dox
when they thought they were just fishin.
She was holdin the line while he was busy pissen
thought she was snagged, or a big fish caught
took a while till he was through as he peed a lot
but finally took the pole and began to reel in
and what a surprise when there was no tail or fin
but only big black boots that must have been
sitting in the lake for a decade therin
Those hefty old pair of docs | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 23 | |
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Posted: 10/20/2006 2:34:18 PM | Those hefty old pair of docs
one wore shoes while the other wore socks
one practiced medicine the other self healin
one worked for peanuts while weeling and dealing
the other charged outrageous prices at cost
to make sure his mortgage and riches were'nt lost
both of them cared of the patients they saw
but one had to practice by letter of law | |
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Posted: 10/20/2006 3:45:15 PM | one had to practice by the letter of the law
retribution delivered by hammer and claw
cake for the peasants rice for the kids
dieing in our back yards of charity and aids
can you spare a nickle I'm out of work and sick
just to fix me up until I get my welfare cheque
they say its in the mail so what ya gonna do
you have to pay so i get paid now pay me what I'm due | |
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Posted: 10/20/2006 5:33:05 PM | you have to pay so i get paid now pay me what i'm due
or you will be sorry boy i'm not letting go of you
tell you what i'll do
i'll let you run my station if you are prepared to work
but i need a labourer not a lazy shirk
the pay is good to take home to feed the wife and kids
so think on it dont waste your time on beer with rubber lids
my time is my time not your time you little squid | |
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