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friendly_dane

Joined: 7/6/2006
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Review please. any suggestions and helpful hints appreciated Posted: 11/21/2006 8:58:39 AM
Hi, I'm hoping to get some good feedback on my profile. So if you have any hints and suggestions i would greatly appreciate it. Thanks

cloudlight

Joined: 8/17/2006
Msg: 2

Review please. any suggestions and helpful hints appreciated Posted: 11/21/2006 10:24:55 AM
Personally I would remove these: Yep, i actually wrote something in my profile, might as well use the space up. and: Anywho, that should be more than sufficient to see if you are interested. If so please do not hesitate in messaging me I will be sure to get back to you. Other than a few punctuation and spelling errors, I think your profile is pretty good and wish you the best of luck!

friendly_dane

Joined: 7/6/2006
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Review please. any suggestions and helpful hints appreciated Posted: 11/21/2006 11:03:21 AM
Thank you, it has been removed and i did a quick read through to remove the spelling mistakes i saw. It's always a bit of a challenge being ESL =/

opencountry1

Joined: 6/3/2006
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Review please. any suggestions and helpful hints appreciated Posted: 11/21/2006 2:35:15 PM
Overall a good effort with a genuine tone throughout. The pictures are good as well, so perhaps you should pay attention to capitalizing the "i"s when you are talking about yourself. I wish you luck!

bucsgirl

Joined: 5/13/2006
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Review please. any suggestions and helpful hints appreciated Posted: 11/21/2006 2:57:50 PM
Yes open said it, genuine. Hard to come by, hats off to you. Greatest compliment I could pay you sincerely is that you're the type of young man I'd love to introduce to my daughter.

friendly_dane

Joined: 7/6/2006
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Review please. any suggestions and helpful hints appreciated Posted: 11/21/2006 8:10:13 PM
Thank you for the compliments. I have made sure all i's are capitalized now :) I really hope that wasn't what kept people away :)

Billbutler8

Joined: 3/12/2005
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Review please. any suggestions and helpful hints appreciated Posted: 11/21/2006 8:26:41 PM
Hey- You have a very good variety of pictures, the profile is well written and interesting... There is one thing that bothers me, and I don't know if it is just a quirky thing for me or if others notice this particular problem... If you look at the bottom of your "First Date" section, you will see empty space between the last sentence and the bottom of the section/box. I think your page will look better if you change this. Placing your cursor in the edit box at the bottom of, and backspacing...until you bring the text down even with the bottom will fix this. I think taking care of this little detail will improve the look of the page overall.

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