| Check this out femalez
Posted: 12/17/2006 10:45:47 AM | | Do you likez? suggestionz and feedback encouraged...peace | |
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| Check this out femalez
Posted: 12/17/2006 1:25:11 PM | By the way you speak I thought you were around 17, then I looked up at your age and thought . My advice to you would be tone down the immaturity and stop adding the letter z to the end of everything. And most importantly...conversating is not even a word, the word you're looking for is conversing.
Good luck.
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| About the Z
Posted: 12/17/2006 1:45:06 PM | | Az long az u understand peoplez...thanx 4 the replyz anywayz | |
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| About the Z
Posted: 12/17/2006 5:28:12 PM | | Why would you even post a profile review if you're not going to even take the advice? You make no sense. | |
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| About the Z
Posted: 12/17/2006 8:03:19 PM | The only place for the z's in this excuse for a profile is for all the... when one reads it.
Did a ten year old girl write this for you?? | |
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| About the Z
Posted: 12/17/2006 9:58:32 PM | I think he is just trying to get some attention...Not the good kind obviously,
Where can I delete this haha Oh my Oh my.
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| About the Z
Posted: 12/18/2006 5:54:34 AM | | I never knew the letter Z was so offensive to REAL life people....firebird...what the hell is that...and I only drink beer you steroetypical **stard....now remember people...please give feedback on other things rather than joining the anti-Z group,ok thanx...and please no negative comments on my native backround, peace | |
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| About the Z
Posted: 12/18/2006 6:25:56 AM | You are absolutely right about the one reviewer's tasteless insults with regards to your heritage. It is unacceptable behaviour to say the least, and I am offended by this as well, which is why I will personally lodge a complaint to administration. Racism is grounds for the deletion of one's account.
The comments about the letter "Z" were not meant to offend. It seriously looks very childish on any profile, and you wanted an honest opinion. The style is very distracting and takes away from any seriousness in your message throughout. Apparently I'm not alone with this observation.
Experiment with changing the "Z", and use the correct grammar. You may find this works much better. You have nothing to lose here. Good luck.
[right you are about the racism, Opencountry, and the offender has been dealt with/Pandy] | |
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| About the Z
Posted: 12/18/2006 6:28:32 AM | | These reviews were brought to you by the letter "Z"... | |
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| About the Z
Posted: 12/18/2006 9:55:16 AM | | Okay Okay Ill change the Letter Z....it doesnt really matter to me, I'm just surprised that people are so upet about it....peace | |
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| Updated
Posted: 12/18/2006 10:11:14 AM | | I fixed the profile and till me if my headline sucks...probaly does, anyways I"ll figure something better afterwards when I have time...peace | |
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| About the Z
Posted: 12/18/2006 11:09:37 AM | OP, it's a thousand times better now. Making those few changes took your profile's tone from smartass to real person. You took feedback and incorporated it to improve. Good for you; not many people do that, and hey -- no one likes it, not even me.
Now. I would suggest again, adding more pics of you, looking at the camera, no hats or sunglasses, smiling. To make your profile more readable, make sure you have a space after all punctuation marks, and break it up into at least two paragraphs.
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| YOUR PROFILE
Posted: 2/12/2007 9:47:06 PM | | I THINK YOUR PROFILE IS GOOD, AND IT REALY DOES MAKE YOU LOOK DIFFERENT WHEN YOU PULL YOUR HOODIE BACK. | |
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| Check this out femalez
Posted: 2/13/2007 5:15:10 AM | More photos is always good. I would add maybe one or two more. no hats,hoodies or sunglasses. The photos you have a good. All your vitals are filled out. I would write your profession as Student.
Your Interests could use some help. I would suggest first writing down on paper your interests this will make it easier when you fill in your box. What type of music you listen to, volunteer work, community events such as powwows, Elders Circles, traditional drumming any and all of it. Artistic interests, if any. Books, authors you've read. These are just ideas. Some of the things you write down could easily go in to your About Me box. I would leave out the comment about no drug addicts and the weed smoking.
Your First Date could be filled out more, since you did list your self as Dating. Ottawa is an interesting place, I'm sure there are lots of places you go, maybe you would also like to take your date. Show her your world. It's you, make it interesting. | |
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