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| Would love a review of my profile, please
Posted: 1/4/2007 4:14:55 PM | All in all not a bad profile. Your type of honest is endearing and from what you typed I get the impression your a gentle person.
Id take the part out about your health issues though. Honesty is good, but thats a little TOO much honesty. Leave that for when your a couple conversations into meeting someone. Give them time to see the good before they see the ...erm...neagtive aspect of your life. | |
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| Would love a review of my profile, please
Posted: 1/4/2007 4:29:54 PM | I'd remove pic #3, unless you can cover up the long white stratch.
Do you have children? Prefer not to say
-that's very offputting to readers, please reconsider your answer and put 'no'
You could be a bit more clear on your expectations for a partner (are you financially independant? should he be gainfully employed? do such things matter?). I note you "do not want children" -- does that mean you'd not welcome a man with kids of his own?
I'd add some EMAIL setting restrictions, or not, if you don't find incoming email ill-suited for what you're seeking at all bothersome. | |
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| Would love a review of my profile, please
Posted: 1/5/2007 10:51:13 AM | Thanks for the suggestions and for pointing out that "prefer not to say" - I had thought I had selected an answer for that one, but evidently I missed it.
I had thought that mentioning the medical issues would weed out those for whom it matters - but I will take it out and see how repsonses react to it. Thanks again! | |
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| Would love a review of my profile, please
Posted: 1/5/2007 4:13:50 PM | I see a lot of things that say what you LIKE, but no much about who you ARE, except for shy. Most people like dogs. There, I said it. So show us how you're different from women our age who like dogs. Do you laugh at pro wrestling, think shoe shopping is a ridiculous waste of time, hope for the best in people while expecting the worst -- or is that just me? Heh.
What I mean is, tell us something about who you are on a personal level that we can connect to. | |
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| Would love a review of my profile, please
Posted: 1/5/2007 6:36:04 PM | | i agree with all of their suggestions, and also maybe tell us about your own webpage, like whats on it, or even put up the address to it, because then people cal go look at it, see your graphics, maybe learn more about you, etc. just a thought. | |
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| Would love a review of my profile, please
Posted: 1/5/2007 9:47:15 PM |
, and also maybe tell us about your own webpage, like whats on it, or even put up the address to it
That recommendation could get this lady's profile deleted. | |
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