| need some feedback on my profile
Posted: 1/5/2007 9:39:46 PM | | hi everyone. I've revamped my profile a little and would like some feedback on what you guys think of it. I dunno if it is too blunt to the point of scaring women away, or if it's just not enough to attract anyone. let me know. thanks | |
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| need some feedback on my profile
Posted: 1/5/2007 9:54:12 PM | ok, here goes, and this is from the heart. I'm a gentle, caring guy who has nothing but the utmost respect for women. I am mostly a non-violent guy, unless it comes to defending my girlfriend.
***Take this out. Unless you speak in grunts and hand gestures.
Whenever I see these A**holes around that hit their girlfriends, it pisses me off.
***You see this a lot?
No guy ever has the right to hit a woman, EVER!. And those that do, well, kharma is a ****. remember that.
***OK WE KNOW THIS! Stop brown nosing and get on with your profile. You can always go and hand out leaflets at the local grocery store if you want to.
When I am in a relationship I am comitted to it. I will do anything to make my girl happy. I'm looking for the girl that will cherish my heart, and my love, and never cheat on me or hurt me in any way.
***BOOOOOOOOOOOORING.
Am I will do the same for her. Cause those guys that cheat on their women are losers, plain and simple.
***BOOOOOOOORING
And I'm definitely no loser. So, if you are interested in meeting a gentle guy that will care for you and never hurt you, then message me and we will chat.
***we know this. Enough of the 'defender of women' routine.
hope to hear from someone soon.
***translation: PLEASE MESSAGE ME!
Before you blow sparks out your ears ask yourself one question: Would any woman learn anything about you (besides that fact that you wont hit her) from this profile?
No.
You didnt say anything. the fact that you have POSTERS taped to your wall screams "I still live with my parents (or college dorm)". Not to mention you might as well have posted the same pic of you 5 times in a row. Ohhh you have more hair in one pic than the other...
Oh and you say you dont think its right to hit women and blah blah but you have a huge poster of "Grand Theft Auto" on your wall. Ironic isnt it? | |
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| need some feedback on my profile
Posted: 1/5/2007 10:02:27 PM | hi, Gentle Florida Guy!,
PICS,
nice mug shots (add an 8 digit number and you'll come across as a real 'bad boy')
-seriously though, a 3/4 Profile shot might do wonders for you (your head would be turned slightly, to either side instead of looking straight into the camera
-anyway, they'll do (#1 actually has a good expression on your face), but there's major room for improvement in both lighting and pose
you need some full body shots, outdoors working perhaps
Profile Remarks:
interests: "dating when I can" -that's borderline whiney (I'd lose it)
"mostly a non-violent guy" -- heh, remember my 'mug shot remark' above? glad you don't have my home address [seriously, that's gotta be the #1 or #2 remark that the ladies do not wish to read in a profile of someone they're about to see]
-good to hear that you're against hitting women (especially in respect to the mug shots, and "mostly a non-violent guy" remark)
-always reassuring to hear someone say they're not a loser (however, might be better, if that's 'understood' or implied by indirect means)
hmm, you've not actually remarked on what sort of woman you'd like to meet -- that would be good to read about | |
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