| | barest boldest deepest daring lines of lovePage 1 of 18 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18) | this one requires a bit of preface
for today on this coldest mornings
in years for in this desert
at 9am it is 25 degrees
0 at nearby mount charleston
can't find the temps for nearby
lake mead, red rock conservation area
or wetlands park...
i've been thinking of this thread
now seems apt time to birth it
i'd like this place to come alive
grow lush and thick with any and all
beliefs wishes dreams thoughts on love
perhaps this sounds simple but
upon deeper delving maybe not
for many it might be both
in any case please freely
bring thoughts be they
fresh new beginnings
yearnings and desires
hopes and light
for yourself or others
anything goes
pain joy lust need greed
either definitions
naughty prose
simple or complex
from your heart
or your mind
hell even your loins
be yourself bold
let it out here
please if you dare
rhythmic flow
not required
but in any way
you desire
this thread now
dedicated to each of us
make it ours my friends
a gift in the new year
i hope will be often used
be it quiet or bold
as you dare unfold
bare deepest your soul
your need your greed
or just an outlet
an expression
for you or him or her
to let another know
you're thinking on them
we are a kindred bunch
i thank you all so much | |
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| barest boldest deepest daring lines of love
Posted: 1/14/2007 10:14:22 AM | last night myself and someone dear to me
exchanged some thoughts and feelings on love
methinks it's both a selfish thing
born of wanting yearning and yes greed
as well a giving thing to please fully
is this also just a purely selfish need
amazingly spiritual cleansing existence
with both giving and taking freely
giving only works and lasts beyond
if both involved truly naturally
just balance both self and other's needs
anything else just fades away
sometimes after too much deliberation
sometimes without communication
necessary but i know and believe
love is different things to everyone
love isn't only how we treat each other
in good times but really more honestly
how we treat another in those truly trying times
love is selfish love is playful love is naughty
love for me is currently dried up yet yearning
sex can be had anywhere but love requires
firstly stimulating my mind and being real
to sustain what inside i feel longing strong
it can be gentle it can be something else
entirely when the need is that of both
in those quick fast heat of the moments
or lingeringly long drawn out hours too
matters only to those two involved evolved
within singular and duality both fire exposed
now i love sex for sex sake but so hate mistakes
i know the difference too but i prefer to chase
elusive dreams to turn into and sustain truth
i have known and miss dearly love which was
sweetly and at times not so sweetly sexual
while i know there are many types of love
in these lines now i mean intimacy between two
not afraid to be themselves vulnerable to the other
with only one other have i ever felt thus far
the desire and need to push the envelope
to speak clearly exposing all vulnerability
everything to be shared and dared freely
a gift unlike any other yet bared for many years
being so hungry after so long apart i've experienced
more than once flying over oceans vast only to
be taken on fine tapestry the tree of life ironically
no time taken even to bathe such bodies were craved
forms cold warmed tongues n pieces found themselves
jumbled tangled limbs faces bones all hollows
brought tears to my eyes then and it still lingers
we gave freely without question to each other wholly
sharing giving everything completely without hesitation
as was our individual intention not to be replicated
nor dared with any other none so brave all others balk
so i know what is real and i know as well what isn't | |
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| barest boldest deepest daring lines of love
Posted: 1/14/2007 10:33:08 AM | God.. softEDGE you are profusely prolifically perhaps profoundly.. pleasing my poetic palate..
"forms cold warmed tongues n pieces found themselves"
just awesome stuff.. | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 10:46:59 AM | i am facing selfishness
within myself its true
with this caustic mouth
capable of creating
softness not before felt
adoration wasted
not anyone's fault
but mine own
now i understand
now i have forgiven
fantasy is sometimes
all we have been left
now is that so bad
no resoundingly no
says me remembering
licking sucking slathering
saliva completely even
covering my own face
as i hunger and feast
wiping my cheeks
my face my hair
my neck my breasts
so hungry to spread
saliva from my own mouth
all over the objects of my desire
yes i am selfish oh very selfish
indeed in need in lust in greed
my love is selfish i won't deny
i hunger to savor fruit of my
deepest longing's utmost desire
i am baring selfishness
within myself its true | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 10:54:46 AM | i totally agree that we see
the same kind of tree
that bares itself and snairs itself to be
just in a moments notice because of what it wants... is
hungering from underneath up to the top
simply put i am also a caustic mouth
a feeling high a fun on the run just as thee
flowing towards the sea
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Posted: 1/14/2007 11:00:29 AM | Yes I agree Miturn-mist
She expressed with depth
the focalized intimacy
of two
to which the multiplicity
can only be jealous
or waiting its time.
Thank you sweet SoftEdge! | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 11:10:15 AM | Dear Miturn-mist
My post was in response to this:
God.. softEDGE you are profusely prolifically perhaps profoundly.. pleasing my poetic palate.
And then I posted the reflection of her words through my eyes. | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 11:12:34 AM | biding in time
he understands
completely
my heart
and my mind
sorry mi it's you dear
failing to understand
or wanting to comprehend
easily enough to be re read
this is a thread about daring
baring selves implicitly
i was feeling bold
but poet friend
i can only be me
awaiting my new
fascination yet
to behold and not
just only in dreams
whispering now
we all deserve reality
it cannot be denied
longing selfishly
our heart and mind's
larger than life desire
sorry if this thread
shocks anyone
it is meant for sharing
as stated in post #1
i hope not too controversial
meant to be from hearts
and mind not just blathering
but in all sincerity and baring
this is a safe place for daring | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 11:58:41 AM | Poets don't have friends. Just lovers..
And my edge is as rough as it gets...hack-sawish even.
I digress......and get a beer.
People often talk about love
Mostly, strangers to each other
"She was a pure as a morning dove"
(oh, sorry. I was thinking about mother.)
Love is so pure that it is violent and constant
Those who have tasted it, yearn for it
And yet fear of ever allowing so much passion run wild again
Hell, I've just started to regain my sanity from the last passion binge
 moo | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 2:44:24 PM | that is so beautifully written, your words reached into me and ......... wow unbelievably great work. The raw, innocent passion and thought your words provoked
Well done :-)
Archangel | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 2:50:24 PM | truly one of the most purely moving pieces of writint. I am going to sooooooooo love this place. There is so much to learn here and be inspired by. Each of us are truly unique and I hope that the people here are willing to help. I was referred here by Tuk. She read what I have written on my profile ~~ WITHIN ~~ She is so very right there arew some very brilliant people here.
Archangel | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 3:52:13 PM | You set your coffee cup on my belly so that I cannot move,
Warm rings of desire still rippling through,
Yet mellowing in my aftershocks, but you,
Have already made us coffee and are about to prove
Why your latest poem is about love.
“ Nectar flowing through the cosmos into the milky way
Swirling above, Spilling into love, Made with you.”
And you reach to touch me there,
Where...
You know you can make me groove
To the strokes of you.
Coffee spills and pools, warm on the knotted bed sheet
Still sweet
With the morning dew
Of Me and You. | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 4:50:48 PM | Whispering tantric teasings
Pleasure pleasings
Between souls
Body to body
We emerge in the Bardos
With complete awareness
Of each others’ bliss
Rocking the place within
Where the waves begin
To renew
In the depths of the love we make
I’m awake
I’m wide awake
With you | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 5:17:31 PM | thank you poet friend
for depth of your understanding
of me but it stings both ways yes?
brawny thank you
for taking your time
to stop here to
leave your lines
putting a smile
here on these lips
(no, not those lips!)
thank you arch
for your so kind words
and tuk too
for nudging you here
i made this thread
as i said
for selfish reasons...
rc sister
both are beautiful
i like your second
write best
thank you for
being so
inspired and
leaving them here
to share with all | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 5:59:31 PM | I fell into your eyes deep as the oceans of time and I swam to your shore willing
we'd sheltered the fears of sleepless years revealing what it was to become us
Once and forever holding you deep in me stirring to breathe you
I'm awakened by your touch
I'm aware of it's dream
calmly and softer my eyes see into your perfect light
You feed me smiles
forever is better with you in it | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 19 | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 6:14:18 PM | Star-lit night by candle light.
A glass of wine, a kiss.
Beating starts, two lovers hearts
combine in rythmic bliss.
A touch, a glance, flirtatious dance.
Romantic night descends.
I wonder though, this time tomorrow
will they still be friends?
Nice write and nice thread my dear.
I'm sure i'll think of more to post here. | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 6:33:23 PM | thank you impact for your impact here, beautiful write.
TiM thank you too for your thought provoking lines herein and your kind words.
at first glance
i was struck
speechless
me
yes i know
surprising
i held my
breath
then caught
it again
then boldly
stood up
heading straight
for you
thusly began
this dream
this life
this dance
4 marriages
one our own
3 divorces down
1 divorce to go
confusing eh
oh but wait
there's even more
many continents
reunions
tears
professions
on bended knee
reality of life here
reality of pain
reality of forgiveness
reality of longing
reality of need
reality of hope
is this love
is this lust
it is both
for both
of both
lasting thusly
more than
half my life
for the past
TWENTY SIX YEARS
of my being me
i still myself again
if it is meant to be
it will again
i soothe myself
and abuse myself
till fire exists again
unless it isn't so
i never say never
but i have let go
future ahead
only knows
a woman
can still dream
but reality of
a wet sunday
would be so much
better indeed | |
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Posted: 1/14/2007 6:50:44 PM | Sometimes I dare,
Sometimes I let go of myself...
Sometimes I see in you a wise mature woman
and that makes me to admire you.
Sometimes I see in you a little tender girl
and that makes me wish to hug you.
Sometimes I see in you, if my lust I allow,
the sensual woman with full feminine attraction
and that makes me... want to kiss your lips
... you add here the rest
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Posted: 1/14/2007 7:03:35 PM | 
thank you for such a lovely write!
always i see in you
a kind and lovely man
always i see in you
the sort i aspire to
and sometimes i do
i see other things too
you add here for now the rest...
you are the sort any woman
would be grateful to have
as her man and know most deeply
i don't hesitate or say this sheepily
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Posted: 1/16/2007 9:37:05 PM | ok, sweeping off the dust with lyrics i adore
from minds i like to listen to and explore
thanks to the the ~ love is stronger than death
lovelovelove
lovelovelove
me and my friend were walking
in the cold light of mourning
tears may blind the eyes
but the soul is not deceived
in this world
even winter ain't what it seems
oh here come the blue skies
now here comes springtime
when the rivers run high
and the tears run dry
when everything that dies...
...shall rise...
lovelovelove
is stronger than death
lovelovelove
is stronger than death
in our lives
we hunger
for those
we cannot touch
all the thoughts
unuttered
and all the feelings
unexpressed
play upon our hearts
like the mist
upon our breath
but awoken by grief
our spirits speak
how could you believe
that the life within the seed
that grew arms that reached
and a heart that beat
and lips that smiled
and eyes that cried
could ever die?
oh here come the blue skies
now here comes springtime.
when the rivers run high
and the tears run dry
when everything that dies...
...shall rise...
lovelovelove
is stronger than death
lovelovelove
is stronger than death
...shall rise... shall rise...
...shall rise... shall rise... | |
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Posted: 1/22/2007 6:59:30 PM | softly as we please
harder as we please
more, pleeease?
wanton desires erupting
as red hot molten lava
spilling over into and onto
sharp jagged peaks of our reality
harshly i awaken to myself
alone again
without smelling your scent
your breathing next to me
the warmth of our bodies spooned
having dreamt yes again of us
my heart emits pitiful cries
my primal needs slowly unendingly bleed
silent tears fall softly winding down my face
hot wet familiar i attend to myself
yes i am but human too
and you still dear so very far away
for now i damn truth | |
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Posted: 1/22/2007 7:03:00 PM | i know
what i
want
for myself
i too
know what i
don't want
for myself
i ain't about
to settle
life is meant
to be lived
and fully methinks
even if i'm
but kind of a geek
my gaze is
unwavering
as is my
intent
i'm taking off
this hindering
seatbelt
ready to soar
do you too
know what
you want
let's just
explore
the many
possibilities
for yes
they do
exist
and while
admittedly
yes thats the
very first step
its not just
solely in our
minds | |
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