| Love poem
Posted: 2/7/2007 11:54:51 PM | People say I should share this... so here it is:
Your voice, your eyes, your hands, your lips
Our silence, our words
Light that goes, light that returns
A single smile between us
In quest of knowledge I watched night create day
O beloved of all, beloved of one alone
your mouth silently promised to be happy
Away, away, says hate
Closer, closer, says love
A caress leads us from our infancy
Increasingly I see the human form as a lovers' dialogue
The heart has but one mouth
Everything by chance
All words without thought
Sentiments adrift
A glance, a word, because I love you
Everything moves
We must advance to live
Aim straight ahead toward those you love
I went toward you, endlessly toward the light
If you smile, it enfolds me all the better
The rays of your arms pierce the mist | |
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| Love poem
Posted: 2/7/2007 11:58:43 PM | this is really terrific
i especially liked this,
Increasingly I see the human form as a lovers' dialogue
The heart has but one mouth
and this
If you smile, it enfolds me all the better | |
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| Love poem
Posted: 2/8/2007 6:24:57 AM | awsome 
thanks for sharing, stumbled apon this while i was browsing forums,
well done, if only i could verbalise so well.
Angela | |
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| Love poem
Posted: 2/9/2007 12:07:32 AM | | thanks... *blush!* | |
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| Love poem
Posted: 2/17/2007 3:58:55 PM | This one is a consequence of http://forums.plentyoffish.com/datingPosts6536308.aspx
Your eyes have returned from an arbitrary country
Where no one ever knew what a glance is
Or recognized the beauty of eyes, beauty of stones,
Of drops of water, pearls as placards
You use the blinding sun as the mirror of your love
And if it seems to obey the powers of the evening
It is because your head is closed, my virtue
By my love and my primitive ruses
My steady desire is your last support
And I take you away without struggling
Inured to my weakness and caught in my chains | |
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| Love poem
Posted: 2/23/2007 2:21:37 PM | This is really nice. You sure have a way with words.
M. | |
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| Love poem
Posted: 2/25/2007 1:14:53 PM | HUH!!! okay ur good! Love to write, i only wishi could write better. Emial me if you like.
MM | |
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| Love poem
Posted: 8/6/2007 7:58:48 AM | | This is wonderfully written. So clear I can picture it and feel it in me. You definitely have talent. Keep writing, if not to post, then for your own personal keeping. | |
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