| Could I get some reviews please?
Posted: 2/19/2007 8:23:34 PM | Hey, I was just wondering if I could get some opinions on my profile in its current state. Feel free to be as blunt as you'd like, that is the best form of criticism. If you have suggestions on what I could do better that'd be awesome too. Thank you in advance to anyone who looks at my profile even if they don't end up commenting in the topic.
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| Could I get some reviews please?
Posted: 2/21/2007 4:47:55 PM | Be more assertive,you come across to me as someone who just goes with the flow.In my opion you need to be noticed here,make some type of wave.later mustride | |
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| Could I get some reviews please?
Posted: 2/21/2007 4:59:56 PM | 1) check your spelling as the too in your headline needs to be spelled with 2 o's....and there were some other typos so get them checked out
2) and i have to agree with the previous guy, you're not really specific what you're looking for....you seem to ramble on a bit about talking and getting to know each other....
So I'd say talk a bit more about what you're looking for and what you're like......and not such long paragraphs maybe? Just my opinion. Good luck! | |
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