| You know the routine
Posted: 3/6/2007 8:44:04 AM | I see that you're trying something different and that's laudable. I'm just not sure it's totally coming off. The free-form ideas...like, caught a fish and ate it, been tickled...are not really catchy enough to propel us forward to read more. Perhaps some more unusual actions...?
Your headline,"The song remains the same." What does that mean to you? Is Led Zeppelin your favorite band? If not, why did you choose that?
Your pics are a little lackluster, in that they're uniform and very neutral in tone -- yellow, beige and brown. And they're just of your head. I'd like to see a better variety of shots in different environments, different colors, etc.
You do have a typo; "tough" when you mean "though." And I'm not sure how much interest wanting a "hang out" situation will be; I'm finding most women are here because they'd like to "date" someone. And remember, a date can be as casual as you like. Consider changing it.
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