Your pictures are "cute"... not serious. I'm not sure what you are wanting them to say - perhaps some more variety would be a good thing. Show the different sides of you.
The first few paragraphs of your About Me are rather negative. When you first meet somebody, would you say - "I don't like long email exchanges"? It's rather abrupt. Either move it to the end of your profile, or get rid of it entirely. Plus that sentence is very hard to read, it needs a re-write if you decide to keep it.
If you do manage to wrangle my phone number from me, please be advised, I will not pick up if you show up as "private". Yup, I screen my calls.
I haven't had much luck on PoF so I am rather suspicious... So at the moment I'll just say that I am looking to make new friends.
These two lines seem very defensive. Again, I'd just get rid of them. You can either share that info when you get to the message stage with somebody, or just keep those thoughts in your head.
Not sure what to say. Love me? I am a short, plump, red haired wench sharing her living space with an emotionally demanding cat and a semi-suicidal bamboo plant.
I'd get rid of the first two sentences, but I love the "emotionally demanding cat and a semi-suicidal bamboo plant" line. Very good! 
The rest is very good, you've done a great job of describing yourself and giving an impression of what it would be like to spend some time with you. I think you sound very interesting and fun.
Get rid of the rocky beginning and I think you've got a winner.
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