| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/1/2007 3:38:08 AM | I have too much time on my hands so if you want me to tell you it straight how I see it then I wont hesitate to tell you exactly where your plus points and negatives are.
As long as your strong enough to take my personal review then you know what to do leave a msg and I will be happy to take an honest look over YOUR profile.
**Remember your asking ME to mooch over YOUR profile and may be brutal or may be flattering so don't come back with your take on mine as I AM NOT ASKING for mine to be reviewed**
That being said feel free to nosey at mine and see for yourself whether you would benefit from my opinions before posting  | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/1/2007 4:24:50 AM | nothing negative thats for sure you had a smile and a genuine laugh in the 1st para top humor and lovely pictures too! looks like I am just one more to agree to the three score and ten favs that already think so!
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/1/2007 3:44:31 PM | FAO Mike,
Cant knock your profile for showing your personality but do recommend you maybe try to use "I" quite so much and put some space in there to make it easy on the eye. In one big clump like that it makes reading about you a real effort.
I'm sure with a bit of effort you could add one or two more pictures maybe full length?
Lovely to see you open up and be honest just need to work on that presentation | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/1/2007 4:04:27 PM | I have a result 4 you ;o)
whuukusshhhh (mad whip noise) best get this over with quick these heels are killin me but the leather feels good 
Love the humor you got going on there and nice presentation, pics clear and individual which certainly speaks volumes about yourself. (sorry heels got to go I just cant type in them)....About the only real thing I could suggest is you wear these darn heels next time! BUT THE BRA & WHIP ARE MINE NOW | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/2/2007 12:48:06 AM | Hi Ingrid,
All the impression I got from reading through and looking at the different selections was that you say your not wanting to be contacted by guys looking for intimate yet overall your profile gives the impression that the casual intimate encounter is something your open to and willing for?
You have no need to tell the www that you got intimate before so maybe try the more subtle approach in your profile and give a few lines about the DIY you have done and how you like to spend your time maybe mention the odd tv program that tickles your fancy?
An extra pic or three would be nice to show more of yourself and your creative side. how about one with a screwdriver  | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/2/2007 3:36:36 PM | David,
Nice picture, lets see more though one is never enough to go off.
The rest I cant be so positive about unfortunately, its very cut throat to a womans eye I straight away got the feeling that your date would be competing with family for your affections.
You don't seem to want an independent woman but rather one very dependent on family. You make clear your religion is paramount which is admirable but should be something written within a paragraph explaining how your time is spent with room for a date to be a part of that?
Part of your Faith according to scripture is that you must leave your parents to make a family of your own, it goes without saying that your family will remain a key part of your life but maybe show your willing to settle down and make your own commitment?
In a nutshell tell your readers that you have values like family and faith, that your lookin to settle with someone who hold similar values and be expressive about your hobbies more.
Hope this helps you meet the right one.
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/2/2007 3:55:24 PM | Hey LeighF1
Either you already took notes on my earlier posts and my own profile and edited it before I seen it or you haven't touched it yet and I cant knock it - simply put there isn't anything to add to your write up just add a couple of different angled shots maybe showing some of your obvious well formed humor and all left to say id all the best to you!
You should reel someone in thats just right for you with good write up like that - anyone not bothering to read your wonderful efforts is not the right one for you! | |
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| want it straight
Posted: 5/2/2007 4:03:29 PM | | Sure, I'd like your views. I think your comments on others that i have seen in the forum were well thought out. | |
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| I don't beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 1:21:05 AM | Hi "416256",
Your writing has no flow to it rather just jumps back and forth causing distraction and confusion. Try breaking it down into paragraphs on each subject you feel you want to get across to your prospective date?
Keep the bits about you together not all over. I think a woman reading that might feel you were very nervous and not very organized, you do seem a genuine guy with some good qualities so let them speak for you?
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| I don't beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 2:01:40 AM | Yeah sure Col'Guy,
Nice pic and very honest profile even the short and sweet ones can say volumes.
You're shy, try not to be, show a bit more confidence in who you are then your profile will surely reel in a very special fish very soon. Oh and those who take the time to read will see your height etc so use that space to talk about YOU as a person.  | |
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