| I'll review and be honest
Posted: 5/9/2007 1:36:51 PM | | If you're interested in an honest opinion on your profile leave a note and I will provide one for you. I'll be honest but won't be rude. If I make a suggestion please don't get all huffy about it! I'll respond as quickly as I can. | |
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| I'll review and be honest
Posted: 5/9/2007 2:15:06 PM | Im always ready for some constructive criticism... im just about to delete my profile and thought I would ask for some advice.
Don't be shy... im ready. Thanks for taking the time to review my profile. | |
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Posted: 5/9/2007 2:24:56 PM | I find other people's opinions interesting, so would you be so kind to critique my profile for me? Please, be honest! I'm loading pictures later this week, which may help... but then again, they may not! LOL
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Posted: 5/9/2007 2:32:27 PM | Taxhappens...I have to be honest...I really liked your profile and the photo's. The photos are all clear and not just a head shot, plus you're smiling in every one!
Your profile wasn't too long or too short. You stated what you were looking for and no negativity at all. My only suggestion is you seem to have a lot of filters on your email that you might want to revisit.
You sound like a great catch! You're in Tampa and I go to Clearwater Beach often...I'll let you know before I head down there again. | |
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Posted: 5/9/2007 2:38:20 PM | | Ok beachbumdeb...you should add more photos. And you're profile is kind of negitive...take out the stuff about hard times. Also add more of your interests. Good luck fishing. | |
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Posted: 5/9/2007 2:42:09 PM | | intellibarbie...you need a photo!!! You're going to get tons more response with one. Your profile is fine except I don't understand what the word "biggun" means??? | |
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Posted: 5/9/2007 3:48:03 PM | Hi Spindler...just a few suggestions. Change your primary photo to the second one from the left. Its a much better photo.
Also the part about Aspergers Syndrome... I think that’s giving out to much personal information. Get ready to tell them after a couple of emails or before you ask for a date but I'd leave it out...to negative.
Otherwise you sound pretty darn good...keep me posted on how you're doing and good luck! | |
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Posted: 5/9/2007 8:21:55 PM | Thanks for the positive comments.
What do you think of it now... after a few edits.
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Posted: 5/10/2007 11:26:47 AM | | I was wondering if you could review my profile and possibly tell me how I can make it better, I know it needs a improving. Thanks | |
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Posted: 5/10/2007 1:00:33 PM | | Hey Shawn, I like your first date idea. Nice profile but I would just make two suggestions…instead of saying “I quickly rush over and open the door for that person” you might want to say “I’m the kind of guy that opens doors for people” and instead of “I respect peoples views even if they conflict with my own and I am NOT the type to not talk to someone because they don't agree with what i believe”…you could just say I value other peoples opinions. And you forgot to put an “L” on the end of email. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2007 1:07:47 PM | | Hi Dominated, I’d lose the part about never having a date before. Tell a little bit more about yourself and add interests. Good luck. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2007 7:35:15 PM | ooh me me.... do me...
ok.. I'll admit it's been reviewed before but am always looking for constructive crtiscism
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Posted: 5/10/2007 8:10:30 PM | | karma...great profile...don't change anything! celibate perfectionist..LMAO! | |
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Posted: 5/10/2007 8:47:39 PM | lol... thanks man you just made my day.
P.S.. liked yours too incidentally... though if it were mine? ... perhaps a paragraph or two instead of one body of text?..
thanks again though man.. appreciate it. | |
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Posted: 5/11/2007 5:39:56 AM | bdmorgan...You should think about changing your photos. Your primary photo is so dark I can’t make it out and your second photo is basically of your chest.
Your about me section is somewhat negative. I would take out some of the things you list that you don’t like and remove the word “whore master”…women don’t like that word. Also you talk about dressing comfortable in the beginning and then talk about it again later…no reason to repeat yourself. I also think that its kind of negative to say “if I’m REALLY interested”…gives the impression she has to try to hard to impress you. Let me know how it turns out. | |
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