| | Profile review please :)Page 1 of 1 | Just looking for any tips on how I could improve my profile a bit. I know it isn't perfect and I'm just wondering if it is missing anything that it should have that (a reader) might be expecting. I don't want it to sound too generic, so any ideas on how to make it stand out a bit are appreciated!
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| Profile review please :)
Posted: 5/12/2007 3:36:48 AM | | Aww...how refreshing! It's simple, straightforward and very sweet!:) I'd fix the typos, but that's about it. | |
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| Profile review please :)
Posted: 5/12/2007 5:34:45 AM | | I'm quite impressed with your profile!! You seem quite mature for your age, and you come across as very kind and open minded, with a very good sense of humor. I wouldn't change a thing! Good Luck!! | |
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| Profile review please :)
Posted: 5/12/2007 10:05:57 AM | I think it reads real good bud - my only suggestion - spell check and proof read.
Good luck!
Tim | |
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| Profile review please :)
Posted: 5/12/2007 4:06:21 PM | Your profile is definitely NOT generic! You've done a good job of showing what sorts of things you like, and explaining what you're looking for. Aside from a couple of minor typos, it's well done. The berry picking idea for a first date is great!  | |
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Posted: 5/12/2007 4:18:16 PM | | I like your profile too, I felt like you were a person I'd want to know. My only recommendations would be....put the first pic of you and only you, it is so easy with a webcam, and to maybe change the "really shy" to " kind of shy" or "reserved", just my opinion but "really" shy concerns me some when I read it. Elle | |
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