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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 8/6/2007 10:57:50 AM | | Well, You said you want a girl who can appreciate you and see in you what others may miss. Its hard to tell what I might be missing. Your photo is only a side view and you don't look happy. You didn't even know what to write about yourself. If you don't know who you are how can anyone else? | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 8/8/2007 12:04:09 PM | hhmmm,
A) She hasn't emailed me yet
B) A long profile name.... but doesn't explain in the profile anywhere the logic behind such an unusual name. Bonus points for the unusual name though!
C) Not enough about her in the "About Me" section. Writers note: Put more of your sense of humor in the section and share more of how you think or your general outlook. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 8/9/2007 1:41:56 PM | answers..lol
B) long name amazing results. My name...Sweet, because I am...Pink, my fav color...flip flop, my shoe of choice....princess, that speaks for itself. HAHAHA
I figure that should be a conversation starter. I find it hard to know what to say to someone at first but when you have sumtin different in your profile then that is a give a away!
C) I 'll work on that! Thank you ;0) | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 8/9/2007 8:24:08 PM | Ok, I'll skip the flipflop person and give Jack a go.
Honestly, the only thing I found lacking in your profile was usage of space - ie, it was a bit hard to concentrate on the words with it all jumbled into one big paragraph. Being a writer myself, I realize the easiest way to lose a potential reader is to make it difficult to hold their attention.
Other than that, I thought, "Damn, am I reading my OWN profile here?" hahaha! Actually we do have a lot in common, what with our outlook on life, humor and writing. You sound like a pretty cool person.
All in all, I found nothing wrong with the profile - it coved all the bases and laid the groundwork for your search. Good luck to you in all your endeavours.
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 8/10/2007 6:36:49 PM | OK...thought I'd join in... I didn't read previous posts about your page:
Jack Mack...Your profile is cool...a lot of information shared. (a lot more than most men share)  The format of the "About me" section is a bit difficult to read. Because of the jagged right edge...it's a little hard on the eyes, making the flow of reading a little slower than normal for me. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 9/13/2007 7:17:36 PM | Welllllll realizing that yea my profile isn't very attractive at all yet got a couple views I decided to update my profile a bit......
Might not be much better but I was trying to be honest about myself and how a few people close to me have commented on me..
Sweet Pink Flip Flop Princess, hope you like this one better :-) | |
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and I agree the pic should include a smile. 
