| Let the critics unite
Posted: 6/25/2007 10:42:08 AM | | I have changed my profile a few times since I first started fishing and feel that it has reached a pretty solid identity of who I am. I know that some might find some of my statements to definitive, but they are posed that way on purpose. I would like to hear what others have to say, so I'm ready for the critique. | |
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| Let the critics unite
Posted: 6/25/2007 12:59:45 PM | The only thing I would change is that headline. That headline is not making that outstanding profile of yours stand out.
You are a very outstanding person, good looking by the way and you need a headline that stands out.
What you have is the same overused headline that almost every other man has chosen.
That is my only criticism.
Other than that good profile 
Riley | |
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| Let the critics unite
Posted: 6/25/2007 2:04:08 PM | Outdoor or outdoorsy to make the title grammatically sound.
There are quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Vut and paste it into word and let the program do it for you.
You abhore a state of society but say you do not judge it. To abhore is to hate. That in itself is passing judgement. It would be better to understand why people are who they are and not associate yourself with those types of people. Judging is subjective, and I have yet to meet anyone perfectly objective anyway.
Even with all the above comments I think it's a very open and honest profile and will attract the type of woman you seek and that understands where you are coming from. | |
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| Let the critics unite
Posted: 6/25/2007 2:53:21 PM | | Tahnks for the ipnut. I nveer was much of a seplelr. I geuss taht's smeohtnig I need to wrok on. | |
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| Let the critics unite
Posted: 6/27/2007 12:19:22 PM | I really like your profile. You sound a lot like someone I know and He is awesome. I like the attitude, the pics and the sarcasm. The profile rates very high on the "unique" scale and was very easy (and fun) to read.
You'll do fine - best wishes~ | |
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