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Posted: 8/2/2007 2:46:50 PM | for you poem lovers out there here is one that i wrote called "memories", feedback is appreacited thank you
Memories
I traced her curves with my fingers
I memorized every line of her wonderous beauty
Her smile lights up the neither regions of my mind
My skin reacts wildly to her touch
Her eyes dispells the shadows within me
Her kiss warms a frozen heart
I would battle the ravages of time to spend forever with her
She is like a sonnet waiting to be tolb
If there was one wish that i would like to acheive
That this moment,this feeling would never end
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Posted: 8/25/2007 5:03:29 PM | wynter that poem is absolutely amazing and whomever you wrote that about should be deeply touched. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2007 10:00:50 PM | To all "cat" and "kittens" out there in fishland i say hello, here is another poem i call "Thank You" if ya like it let me know.
Thank You
Her beauty before me is that of spun crystal
I am not worthy to view myself in her reflection
Her voice sings to me like an aria of angles
To look into her eyes is to see heaven
My love for her grows like an white orchid
The gods allowed me to share in her life
Her kiss to me is that of a warm summer rain
Her soothing blissful presence calms me
For the first time,in my life I'm truly alive
My spirit is free,my fears are gone
Being with her I'm not afraid of the dark anyomre
She walks my path with me freeley
She calms the tempest within me
My fallen tears,she wipes away
She fills the center of my lonley heart
She gave meaning to an meangless life
For this I am enternaly thankful
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Posted: 8/25/2007 10:38:14 PM | | very very sweet and sensual poems. | |
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Posted: 8/26/2007 4:23:52 PM | | Beautiful once again. To the man of many words. Bravo | |
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Posted: 8/26/2007 9:13:39 PM | Hello to all again out there in the world of fish, here is one that is a little different which i call "Fever". if possible what does this poem makes you think of replys & responce are appreacited.
Fever
As I lay in bed tossing and turning
Dizzing thoughts enters my mind
Ruby red nails graze across my skin
My breath heaves as they journey onward
The sensation it leaves causes me to shiver
A thin sheen of perspiration forms on me
I remember an ice cube, as it burns across my body
I see a vision of her... she's by my side
The smell of her perfume is intoxicating
Her presence capativates my being
As i awaken, I am surrounded by torn covers
Wildly I scan the room hoping for her
To my dismay there is no one here
Was it a hallucination? a fevered dream?
Then I stopped and a smile formed across my face
A hint of Jasmine still lingers.....
hope to those whom read this enjoy it and let me know what ya'll think, have a crazy cool day | |
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Posted: 9/1/2007 3:28:27 PM | To my friend,
Once again a beautiful piece of art. Keep up the fine work that you do. | |
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