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Posted: 8/7/2007 11:55:37 PM | | Hey I was wondering if some women would be willing to review my profile and to tell me what they think about it. Feel free to comment on everything from my appearance in my pictures to the content of my profile, you can be as harsh as you want, I would prefer that suggestions aren't sugar coated, if you think something is bad, blunt and harsh comments works fine. Thanks for the help! | |
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Posted: 8/8/2007 12:33:35 AM | Simplifying it down, this is essentially your profile...
ABOUT YOU
- pretty active and work out frequently
- pretty laid back
- enjoy making the people around me smile
There's really little you do to stand out. There was a forum thread the other day about how "laid back" is the most frequently occurring term in male profiles, with humor being up there as well. Basically, you're like literally thousands and thousands of other guys. If a girl has an entire inbox full of profiles, you need to give her a reason to remember yours. Identify some personal characteristics that set you apart.
ABOUT HER
- wants to enjoy life
- knows whats going on in the world
- catch my smart witty jokes and send them back as well
Although this can come a significant number of girls, that's not always a good thing. It really helps to have a tangible sense of what you're interested in. Not only will it allow your interactions to be more focused, but it will also communicate to the girl you're having a conversation with that there's something special about her. | |
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Posted: 8/8/2007 12:49:10 AM | | Like ^^^^^^ he said it doesnt stand out. If humor is one of your best qualities showcase it in a way that makes you unique. As far as you pictures go I'm not a woman but maybe loose the beer stein and BBQ lighter makes me think, to much into "partying". | |
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Posted: 10/12/2009 4:56:30 PM | Just changed up my profile and I would greatly appreciate any thoughts on it.
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Posted: 10/12/2009 6:07:22 PM | Hi WowPerfect,
Pretty good…it has a lot of potential….just like you….(that’s a compliment btw, not sarcasm)
A few suggestions…
1) A bit grandiose/arrogant on the name…maybe tweak it a bit….AlmostPerfect? PerfectInProgress? MrWonderful? MrRight? JustWhatTheDoctorOrdered?
2) Crop the beer out of the photos and post more…a full bod shot would be delightful.
3) Reorganize your past jobs from least impt to most.
4) Nix “good things pop up in front of you” and nix “slip thru your fingers”….she’s staring between your legs now looking for something to pop up….and wondering if it’s that small that it slips thru the fingers.
5) Nix the homeless guy in NYC….bad/sad vibes. How about a fun nyc story?
6) Love the white to off-white! It’s a home run!
7) Ya need a better 1st date…come on, you live in NYC….romance the lady. You offered her your coat, so where are you gonna go....fave restaurants, Bronx Zoo to show her that endangered species, fave comedy club. This is a place to shine, not cop out.
Kick it up a notch, and you’ll have a winner.
Best to you. DenverSky5280  | |
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Posted: 10/12/2009 8:47:15 PM | | Thanks for the suggestions, I took as many as I could. I will be getting a full length picture at some point. I really didn't realize a lot of the things you said, thanks for the help. | |
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Posted: 10/13/2009 10:33:20 AM | WINNER! Best of luck with the dental school application. You seem like a smart and caring guy, and would probably make a fine dentist! :DenverSky5280  | |
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Posted: 10/13/2009 10:41:03 AM | I agree with the other lady poster, this is now a winner. If I were you're age and anywhere in the vicinity I would definitely contact you and meet you. Make sure you are reaching out to women nearby (both in person of course and on here). We still like to be approached. Good for you for taking the good advice you got here, you'd be surprised how many people post for review and then defend everything they've done, rather than improve their profiles!
Good luck, although you won't need it! | |
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