| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 8/21/2007 12:12:21 PM | ok.. I have to admit, I snuck over to California's forum and stole this, but they had a ton of fun with this, let's give it a try....
Want to be criticized well this is the thread for you!
What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 8/21/2007 5:34:58 PM | Yea! I'll bite...
I think your profile is really great, Carmen, with the possible exception that I think you are probably a lot more attractive than your pictures really reveal. But, then again, coming up with pictures for these things is usually a comedy of errors for me. Content-wise, I think you did a really good job, provided a lot of information and threw some things out there that a guy could respond to and ask questions about or comment on.
All in all, I would give you an A.  | |
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Posted: 9/17/2007 9:33:41 AM | Wow, this is kind of a scary thought, but heck why not. I am game too. Since linagain was above me I checked out her profile. I have to say, well done. Not many people out there actually take the time to take a look at the real person behind the face, she has done a great job of describing who she is. I don't have the degree in Journalism as she does, but have been told I am pretty well spoken. Girl, you have a very infectious smile. I bet we could have some great conversations over coffee. So yuppers, you earned your A. You dun good...Have a great day.
Now let the bashing of my own profile begin..heheeheh. I am man enough to take it... | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 12/14/2007 12:40:52 PM | No wonder this thread ended....I personally cant see anyones profile other then the OP's. So hopefully with my post this thing can get started again. I am personally interested in knowing what people think about my profile and if nothing else learning what needs to be improved. Look forward to hearing soon.
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Posted: 12/19/2007 7:45:58 PM | Wow, lots of good information in your profile. You definitely seem to know what you want and what you don't want. If I were a man looking at your profile and were looking for a self confident and fun loving woman I would contact you in a heartbeat. One thing though and this is just me, but the first date thing...... Maybe could get a little to involved for a first date. But then again I'm a little gun shy lately.
OK so the next one, be real honest with me because I want to fine tune my profile.
This is a great idea.
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 12/29/2007 8:14:55 AM | tyft....... i think you have to many restrictions.... no women can email you and thats fine if thats what you want, but pof is a GREAT way to make friends...male and female...... also your age restrictions are only a 10 yr span....... what happens if you met a guy that was 44 or 56 and they were everything you wanted?....... you that one year age difference stop you from dating them?........
Also...... the comment about the job and car, or the car and house......... i agree with you on them, but to state that, some men may think you might be after their money, even though that you state you also have your own!!
Pics are great and i envy you the pic in the lake surrounded by the mountains!!
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 1/2/2008 8:46:33 AM | There seems to have been a breeze blowing in from Ohio (?)
bcr8iv - Your profile might read a little abrupt to some, but as a Sag too I understood it was just some straight shooting. Nothing wrong with knowing who you are and what you want or need! Nice that the PoF pond has been friendly for you.
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Posted: 1/19/2008 12:52:39 PM | lovemycello, I really liked your profile.
If you're genuinely nice, it came across well. I'm a stoner and I haven't much stock for drinkers but your profile did you plenty of justice...I think, then again I don't really know you. I would go so far as to suggest you include what musicians you enjoy and which conerts stuck out with you while you were working at that venue. This is something I'll be adding to my profile next but maybe it would help to tell where you see yourself after being a Mcmanager.
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Posted: 5/16/2008 10:31:57 AM | toandfrom4004
I think you did a great job personally. I wouldnt have listed so many interests as I got board with your profile before I got halfway though them. I would probably go into more detail in your introduction part...like what you are looking for instead of just your "you want-cool" comments. Also the first date...kinda disturbed me....I cant think of anything I would do on a first date that included a notebook and nylons...... | |
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Posted: 8/10/2008 6:16:06 PM | garmondo?
your fourth picture is not as cool as your main pic but it does give a better look at your face if you make it in to a closer pic even better. I like your profile it gave me enough about you and left stuff to talk about. | |
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Posted: 12/22/2008 9:37:53 AM | well in general it was ok I guess. But since this is a place ti criticize I'll be ***hole for once.
So yeah you talk to ****in mush, nobody gives a shit about when you were last single damnit. (last millenium)
"I'm a simple easygoing, average; my glass is half full type of guy. "= I'm boring, unoriginal, and the air on my ass is longer than the shit on my head.
But in all seriousness I'm sure your nice and that was all shit talkin. so I hope somebodies kills my punk ass profile cuz what I just did was mean.  | |
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Posted: 12/27/2008 10:23:58 AM | hmmmm... what would work better is constructive criticism... what works and what doesn't? What is good? What is bad? what is right? what is wrong?
but... sticking with the thread...
"What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?"
that there is such a thread!
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Posted: 12/27/2008 4:35:21 PM | | YOUR PROFILE IS LONG.I DONT THINK WOMEN WANT TO HEAR THE GORY DETAILS OF YOUR LAST RELATIONSHIP,MAKES YOU SEEM LIKE YOUR DWELLING.I GOT BEAT UP BY MY X AND I TRY NOT TO REMEMBER THOSE TIMES MUCH LESS USE THEM IN MY PROFILE.I LIVE IN A SMALL TOWN IF I LIVED WHERRE THERE WAS A BUS I'D TRY MEETING WOMEN THE OLD FASHION WAY......IN PERSON.SOUNDS LIKE YOUR A GOOD CONVERSATIONALIST GO MEET CHICKS IN PERSON. | |
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Posted: 1/1/2009 5:04:38 PM | All capitol letters, run-on sentences. you dont clear shot of your face. Its cool that you a musician, try posting a "normal picture". I know most women probably are impressed that your strong, but your opening line about how much you can bench shouldnt be first on your list.....  | |
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but I read all of it. Best of luck!
Sooo maybe change it?
