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tigerbee

Joined: 9/11/2006
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Is it too long? My ahhmm, profile that is... :) Posted: 9/21/2007 1:23:16 PM
Is it too long? My ahhmm, profile that is... :) Also: is my sense of humour understandable? Or too over the top? As I'm told that I can be a tad sarcastic at times, but that hasn't hurt Denis Leary career, so... be gentle...

Irish Eyez

Joined: 7/2/2006
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Is it too long? My ahhmm, profile that is... :) Posted: 9/21/2007 1:32:22 PM
Personally, I do feel you're trying waayyyy too hard to impress the women with your profile re: humour etc, that it truly lacks anything constructive about YOU - the most important thing! What's with the 'first date' ? It's nothing but inane ramblings. Start again - less of the sarcastic humour though.

jkinmn

Joined: 9/13/2007
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Is it too long? My ahhmm, profile that is... :) Posted: 9/21/2007 1:33:22 PM
Well, I made it to reason 4 before I figured a woman is going to go, no. I don't think a women is going to find it humorous that you implied she is fat and can't afford batteries for her toys. Is that something you would say to woman in person? I understand you're playing the humor angle, but you're coming off as vulgar and abrasive. I would scrap it and start from scratch. Use your sense of humor for good, not evil!

Tombo50

Joined: 1/13/2007
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Is it too long? My ahhmm, profile that is... :) Posted: 9/21/2007 1:53:02 PM
Where is Denis Leary now? Tough one to rate because I like the humour. So I may end up stealing some stuff from your profile to use eslewhere. You won't get any credit but thats the life of a ghostwriter. You are 41 but the age range of the women you are seeking is 20-50. Try to narrow it down to 36 -45. If things don't pick up maybe its time for new material or a reworking but what the heck. What is it you do to them when they can't take a joke?

OpheliaBonMot

Joined: 8/12/2006
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Is it too long? My ahhmm, profile that is... :) Posted: 9/21/2007 2:29:38 PM
Since you asked, my opinion is, it's too over the top. Maybe if you were poking fun at yourself or social oddities, it would fly, but by the time you say this: But besides proving how well I can piss off a bunch of fat chicks who smoke (sorry, but if you want politically correct, go watch Oprah) . I was well and truly turned off and tuned out. I guess the big question is, does your profile get you the results you want from women, not just high-fives from like-minded men?

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