| Is THIS it? :) Please review my profile.
Posted: 9/23/2007 12:26:28 PM | Hi. Please review my profile. Is THIS it? :)
So, (because I have to add 200 characters...) let's try categorizing by section, my:
-pic
-profile length
-is my humour too "over the top"?
-my "pickyness" in my "mate shoppping list" | |
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| Is THIS it? :) Please review my profile.
Posted: 9/23/2007 3:16:57 PM | 1st- add a few more pictures. a full body shot, another face shot,etc. More pictures will help to catch a womans interest and make her actually WANT to read the description (i admit didn't read the whole thing... i'm sorry )
2nd- you should take out the part about having Shania twains body... instead you could say something like, that you are looking for a healthy,slim woman..
good luck fishin  | |
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| Is THIS it? :) Please review my profile.
Posted: 9/23/2007 3:34:48 PM | Sandi wants to see more! ;) jk
Well, you can definitely make a woman laugh! I agree it is a little lengthy and I also skimmed through it, but then again you live far away so I wasn't seriously looking!
I would imagine with a profile like that you would get a lot of takers, but maybe you need to show a serious side, too?
I liked it. | |
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| Is THIS it? :) Please review my profile.
Posted: 12/6/2007 2:46:48 PM | Hmmmmm... I liked it. I think it will attract the kind of person you are looking for. If someone looks at it and skims over it, then they won't be who you want. I think to get your sense of humour, they'll have to have your sense of humour (know what I mean??)...so it'll work. I do agree though, add more pics.
Your 'pickyness'... not at all picky. Weed 'em out in the beginning. I didn't find anything offensive.
I like. :) | |
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Posted: 12/6/2007 3:13:56 PM | Not applying for the free lollipop but it's Led Zep's The Rain Song. I prefer the opening line, so much more upbeat!
I love your sense of humour.
Way way way too many Interests - especially as you then list 3/4 of them in the First Date section... I read somewhere 10 is pushing the upper limit. I read the first one, realised they stretched over more than one screen's worth and scrolled straight past them.
Try
Music
Film
the paranormal
etc etc, you get the picture.
And don't repeat them. Then I have something to ask questions about!
HTH
Anne | |
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| Is THIS it? :) Please review my profile.
Posted: 12/6/2007 3:33:38 PM | | I don't think you have enough interests. And you don't seem to like many things. Have you tried having an open mind about things. There are at least 4 more things in this world you could be interested in. Keep an open mind, that's all I'm saying. | |
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