| /////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\ Posted: 9/29/2007 1:49:55 AM | There used to be someone who frequented this forum, and unfortunately has been lost to us. He had an amazing way of saying so much in so little.
I miss it.
I guess we can all tend to ramble along, and I'm one of them, but so much pure POETRY was created in so few lines, and it has stood out since he left that perhaps we have lost (or maybe neglected) this art.
I am hungering for it.
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| /////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\ Posted: 9/29/2007 4:03:57 AM | ^^ thanks cuz
I saw you there today In a childs bright lit smile And the way he wrinkled One eyebrow And you ...... Smiling back at me through dimpled cheek | |
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| /////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\ Posted: 9/29/2007 4:19:26 AM | Welkome. Sex sells so how about a quickie?
- SEXUALLY CHARGED QUICKIE -
Looking hot and feeling obscene Fingers fumble with thoughts unclean Lick your lips and bed those flirts Taste the flesh such sweet deserts
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| /////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\ Posted: 9/29/2007 4:40:35 AM | yeah.... but at least it only took up a few lines?
Sexually charged quickie?
Nipples harden under strobing flesh As fingers probe and then sweet breath Comes quick and GASP is heard...and felt As breath drawn in, back arches..held With eyes wide shut and arms thrown high Sweet passions brace...that ends in sigh
Not quite what I meant cuz but...ya know  | |
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| /////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\ Posted: 9/29/2007 4:51:03 AM | Let's go down to tinsel town, leaving the sea and the sky, and with my last breath, when I am close to death, I ask myself, why oh why! | |
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| /////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\ Posted: 9/29/2007 5:55:26 AM | Sometimes I am too taken into this world, this place and it destroys my heart, my soul I am open to hate and hurt though I try to close my soul to it...... | |
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| ~ In 6 Lines or Less ~ Posted: 9/29/2007 6:46:40 AM | I watched your sillhouette Silently strong Unmoving Against the light of A thousand fireflies glow
And I breathed the magic of you....just standing there | |
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| /////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\ Posted: 9/29/2007 6:51:28 AM | Silent and still The great divine Holding my hand, our souls intertwine Wishing your heart will always be mine But time has told another tale To you my love, the best farewell... | |
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| /////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\ Posted: 9/29/2007 1:32:49 PM | My Green-wing Macaw parrot says “Hallelujah” and “Praise the Lord” He stares at me when he gets too bored Stays up half the night and sleeps to late So my religious bird won’t go to church Nor put any nuts in the collection plate. | |
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| /////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\ Posted: 9/29/2007 1:38:33 PM | I want to feel your skin kiss your lips, touch your soul become one with you breathe your breath melt into you be yours.....
My skin,I offer, a coat nay a shield my lips await, my soul you have. I exhale my breath to almost asphyxiation I am so pourus to you be mine..... | |
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| ~ In 6 Lines or Less ~ Posted: 9/29/2007 6:59:21 PM | Bent now in agony The big tree still thrashes and churns Whips its arms wildly Like some frenzied beast Beset by swarming bees And slowly dying | |
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| ~ In 6 Lines or Less ~ Posted: 9/29/2007 7:21:20 PM | I wrote this quite a while back but it might be a good fit here?
I am hawk Perched on leather glove No leashes hold me I am imprinted By the voice of love It is enough | |
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| ~ In 6 Lines or Less ~ Posted: 9/29/2007 7:37:15 PM | I commit to remaining detached your coy ways and cowardice catch me coupled with confused longing and lewd lyrics frowning staying up late trying to find meaning trying to stop thinking about you | |
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| ~ In 6 Lines or Less ~ Posted: 9/30/2007 5:08:59 AM | Thanks for all the great contributions guys Loving them
Reaching out You touched my memories with Your crooked fingers Grasping claws But time has left them Untouchable
They are not yours
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| ~ In 6 Lines or Less ~ Posted: 9/30/2007 7:35:24 AM | If I close my eyes for just one moment to feel your lips on mine will I miss forever in your look or just a day as it passes by | |
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| ~ In 6 Lines or Less ~ Posted: 9/30/2007 7:38:56 AM | champrins
i love your poem that starts ''i watched your sillhouette'' | |
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| ~ In 6 Lines or Less ~ Posted: 9/30/2007 10:11:01 AM | The words you utter like a verbal vomit poisonous and vial to all who hear it | |
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