| Give me a gander
Posted: 10/2/2007 5:24:50 AM | Ok guys and girl I wrote this for my first love even though I haven't seen her in ten years. She moved away and I've been heartbroken since I was 16. Had a few girlfriends but nothing major.
I'm always on my own
When I walk out to the world I gaze across the land
I seek out what left in me in the midst of the sand
Everything is changing worlds will always collide
Everywhere are lovers I wish I had died
I keep seaching and finding nothing I can't quite see the truth
I'm molten in my shell cant quite see it through
Every where's a journey but without you by my side
I can see the ocean but I can't quite hear the tide
When I'm bound to the darkness stiffness in my heart
I'm lost and baffled my soul is torn apart
Losing each day without you brings me to my side
Lost in eternal memories when you were by my side
Nothing is for certain
but when there is nothing left
I wish i was upon you with your head upon my chest
Lost in eternal darkness i must carry on
But i promise each day i'll find you even when i'm gone
Keep in mind i'm still a newbie at poetry, but I'm as good as they come right? ;) | |
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| Give me a gander
Posted: 10/2/2007 5:31:38 AM | a very famous poet once told me that you only get better by getting callouses on your ass....... of course you have the chops!!!! keep on grinding them out!!!!!!!! good luck!!! | |
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| Give me a gander
Posted: 10/2/2007 6:32:39 AM | Here's my favorite quote I guess since I wrote it. It's used in my book.
"What do people fear the most? Is it the inner desire to achieve what they can't see? Is it the dreams of man that envy the gods to force each other into oblivion? One thing is for sure, man will never realize his destiny unless he wakes from his dream."
Lemme hear your thoughts on it | |
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Posted: 10/2/2007 7:46:02 AM | Is there ever a need to love again
Will I find peace and happieness without another hand
Does the word love hold a title in this world anymore
Everyone's so spoiled and rotten unsure in the core
Does love come from feelings within
Or is it when your other tells you they love you in return
I often find myself admiss in this game of shrueness and bickering
I want a life I can hold one another's arms while our love is thickening
Does the age of love last for eternity
Or does it pass on a cosmic scale like a blink of an eye
Such is the game in the world of players
Hearts broken without any prayers
I wanna love forever but my heart can't take anymore abuse
I'm not the clown and I'm not here for your amuse | |
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Posted: 10/2/2007 9:10:27 AM | Walking through halls
Couple holding hands in stalls
Makes me envious and jealous i'm not the hand she's holding true
Just a girl so beautiful I can call her name and she's in my eyes view
Embracing touching kissing delights me but I have no one around
I stumble for words and am often looking at the ground
Would she like me for me
Is there anything else I can really be
Such confusion in a world of enough lies and games
I try to seek comfort but it all comes out the same
I just want someone for me
In this world full of lovers I deserve my chance to be | |
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Posted: 10/2/2007 10:59:31 AM | What was lost shall be found inside your heart
Knowing you should have kept it from the start
If we’re all on a ship sailing away
Into the sunset each day
While some of us are lost at sea
There’s always a lifeboat you throw to me
My saviour from the storm
When the rain washes down and pours
The water falls in your eyes tell of the paths you made
I wish we were all birds to fly in the sky for all man’s sake
Even when you know that’s why we kept apart
The paths you’ve chosen left you down in the abyss of your heart
Fly my child follow your heart
You’re only tearing your soul apart
Live each day with a smile
It will bring you from your knees for a while
The more you practice what you truly feel
The more burdens and pains won’t kill
What and who you really are
Is showing like a diamond or shooting star
Fall to earth where you’re truly blessed
Give not into temptation and let your soul rest | |
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Posted: 10/2/2007 11:20:08 AM |   My friend....these are all very very nice! Poetic you are...and feeling for sure! I admire your youth! Wish often I could go there again! Yet we cannot go back...just make it all something to last! A poem for you...my friend!
Upon this shore we cast our hearts
many come...many part........
Know that in your tide of ocean
lives will touch and then suddenly leave you!
Always something rolls in again...
a gentle Hi.....or love they send!
Always know that in life....we cannot keep
all the things that touched us deeply
Miles and miles of ocean to go......
tides to come....and slowly roll out ....again
Always coming back to you....
the Soul that brought them In!
Just continue on as you.........
try not to let the leavings Blue.....
For this is the simple truth that lives.....
loved ones come....we care...we give......
Just as simply as they came.....
they leave ....and there we are ...again!
Making us stronger...wiser...surer...
of our fate.......we smile and suffer!
I wish and hope that all you need.....
comes to you...and plants a seed.....
Let it come...let it go....
For only the strongest heart can know.....
All it meant...all it showed...
all you learned.....in the long hard road!
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Posted: 10/2/2007 11:27:56 AM | | You keep winkin at me Celest and I'll marry you yet lol | |
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Posted: 10/5/2007 7:45:39 PM | No matter the distance no matter the cost
I'll be with you till all is lost
No matter the wars no matter the tears shed
I'll be with you till my last blood has bled
As long as there is breath from my lungs
I'll be with you till the chorus is sung
I need you like fire needs heat
Our bodies pressed there's no need for sleep
With you I feel none of the world's problems affect our love
I feel at peace and harmony like Heaven is smiling above
There's no longer what's right and what's wrong
As long as you know our love will always be strong | |
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Posted: 10/5/2007 8:55:40 PM | The crow beckons to rise
Deep in your grave you awaken from your slumbery tomb to call upon the crow's eyes
The crow sees, feels all, knows all even what you kept private to you
The crow will stalk you down with justice in his view
Beware criminals of the night
Fore their is a new brand of law in sight
You think your safe in your quivering bed
The crow is immortal already dead
Bullet by bullet you try to shoot out through his heart
The crow smiles not giving it a thought
One by one he drags your carcass through the streets
No one is safe if you're with evil he'll hack you like a piece of meat
Sleep well children the crow protects us all from harm
If you intently hurt others you need be alarmed | |
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Posted: 10/6/2007 12:07:49 AM | lberserkerl....These lines were so beautiful.....sigh yes it is always inside us after all...
What was lost shall be found inside your heart
Knowing you should have kept it from the start
Drifting and floating in a purple haze
I long to hear your voice just once more
feel your touch, laugh with you
dance the dance of love
Whispered words in the moonbeams
the language of lovers entwined
unspoken moments in time
I yearn to recapture them
You are there and I am here
but I want you to feel my heat
touch my heart with words
melt my skin with your voice
The tingle in my blood
of endearments in the dark
feeling your voice caress me
setting my frozen soul aflame | |
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Posted: 10/6/2007 1:17:04 AM | Ty lacrymosa always good to hear other pros comments on my poetry especially when you like mine :P
If there's a vision what do you see
Is it true is it meant to be
Often I ponder if this girl in my dreams is real
If she is she's mine can I touch her to feel
Scarred that she'll run away from my arms
Maybe it's just a dream but I mean her no harm
Several girls come into my life all at one time
Should I give them up to a dream that may not be in line
Do I have a destiny with this woman to be
Or is she a shadow emotion not meant to see
If I could I'd give her my soul
For I trust her in every way she's not made of coal | |
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Posted: 10/6/2007 3:30:36 AM | Sheltering hearts whisper in the wind
When will it be time for my love to begin
Is it with an old friend or old flame or new
Sun shine even though my love is never through
I often wish on hearts of glass
Begging for more love to come atlast
Am I in focus
Do words turn you away like a locust
It's how I show you all I can care
Just watching and waiting you might've always been there
I often pray to the moon that you're under the same light wondering where I've been
With me angel there is only light forget all the sin
Does the average man want to be with you too
I'm very vague on that cause I want to be your lover thick and through
Shelter me in your arms lemme know you love me again
Before I pass away a broken man who lived in sin | |
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Posted: 10/6/2007 4:02:07 AM | | lberserkerl, you have a wonderful talent, thank you for sharing. | |
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Posted: 10/6/2007 8:57:34 AM | Guys girls i'm gonna attempt to make a song suggestions praises appreciated
Keep in mind it needs a beat
Close your eyes open them up to the dream
World of fantasies and all that they seem
Close your eyes awaken them brand new
Life is the bounty we all sung through
Is your heart trully open or do you leave me in the clouds
There is no love without you I know it somehow
If this is more than a dream awake me from my pain
And drift away with you out like the rain
I'll work on it more later it's open for topic for now | |
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Posted: 10/8/2007 3:23:59 AM | I came her for inspiration and maybe a view
I didn't come here to see a war going through
Hopefully the ones that care see my point of reason
While the wicked like the witch grow out of season
Spoiled rotten lil punks who don't deserve to share the same air
For my friends I will always be there | |
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| I'm back after my "Vacation"
Posted: 10/14/2007 12:47:24 AM | Wrote this when I was 16 decided to post on someone's thread and now I'll put it on mine
Last One Standing
A twisted death
A solemn kiss
Left alone
In this abyss
My empty void
Fills me whole
My Ecstacy
Has never fold
My heart is bleak
I twist for comfort
And never sleep
I'm not alive
Yet I'm not dead
I am forever gone to the planet
No one cares
My life is spent
I travel on
I'm born again
This time alone | |
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| I'm back after my Vacation
Posted: 10/14/2007 11:13:09 AM | A lovely poem my friend! Just know you will read this again...and again!
Reminding you of a time so sweet! Memories for you to keep! hugs jules | |
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| Who'm I to be with
Posted: 10/20/2007 1:18:13 AM | Was it the girl I held in my heart all these years
Someone new and exciting for my heart dispite my tears
Was I meant to be with a troll
And we live under a bridge or a grassy knoll
Does the sands of time hold my fate of who to love out of my misery
Surely with my heart I deserve someone out of this world just extroidanary
Or does the gods fear my pressence and shift my fate to be just alone
I hope for a just god, I love him dispite my heartache but I hope he has a wonderful future for me untold | |
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Posted: 10/23/2007 6:25:02 PM | Hiya B., thought I would stop in and say Hi!
Have you ever felt like life let you down?
Although you have tried....again ...you failed?
Like the hope has all trickled and fallen within?
Like your mind is a spinning web of where to begin?
I think sometimes this may be what it takes.....
To get me to sit up ...pay closer attention
Like the windstorm of knowing is lost in the sea!
Yet with all the storm ....peace comes back to me!
If any of this makes sense.....I shall pray.......
I am looking upon a new found lovely day!
Just to leave the moment and renew my soul
Find the dream .....that awaits me ....my hopeful goal! | |
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Posted: 10/24/2007 7:51:48 AM | Sometimes it isn't only my fellow women who give me strength
When a man can be soft, there's enough to give thanks
Sometimes I categorized all weeds the same way
And then forget to admire the plantain that lay
Amongst the grass and the other weeds
Who's cures for cuts and pains and other ills
Was always there to be cherished and seen | |
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Posted: 10/24/2007 7:58:02 AM | Ty Jules for understanding. And ty Jess... Almost sounds as if you admire me :D.
Should the distance be worth the cost
To find love anew from what was lost
Do the lillybuds dance and grow astare
While the roses we're always there
My friends a true garden of delights
You keep me warm all through the nights
I hope I find one like you all in this game of lies
And pray not for a witch that I would dispise | |
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Posted: 10/24/2007 12:51:13 PM | Great thread lberserkerl
"What do people fear the most? Is it the inner desire to achieve what they can't see? Is it the dreams of man that envy the gods to force each other into oblivion? One thing is for sure, man will never realize his destiny unless he wakes from his dream."
Lemme hear your thoughts on it
Perhaps some thoughts in a poetic response
if you'll forgive my stealing your words to fill
the last three lines ... I would certainly be keen
to see your book if it's been published and do
please feel free to use this poem in any of your
future publications since it was inspired by your quote ... cheers, JR
Sometimes I wonder
where is my life taking me
through mountains and rocky streams.
In quiet meditation
solitary contemplation
facets of life never what it seems
experiences are sent to teach me
I feel Angels reaching out to set me free
yet still I withdraw and retreat into dreams
Country music plays on my stereo
Words spill from my pen again and again
rambling thoughts inside a mind that screams
Then one rainy day
a man passed my way
dropping these words to me, in his eye a gleam
"One thing is for sure," he said
"man will never realize his destiny
unless he wakes from his dream."
***JWR*** | |
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| Peace was made
Posted: 10/25/2007 4:01:26 PM | There was a battle on the poetry threads I visit. All it took was two women to talk about losing their children for peace to endure.
Machevelli (sorry might be spelled wrong) once wrote ...... "Is it better to be loved or feared" I believe aswell it's better to be feared. However a tyrant is never loved unless they show one act of benevolous.
This goes out to all of us merging t0gether as one for the common goal. | |
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| Peace was made
Posted: 10/25/2007 4:38:20 PM | lberserkerl , doubt you need me to tell you, but your poems are beautiful, deep and touching! Made me feel a little sad  NEED A HUG! xxxx keep it up! | |
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