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Posted: 10/7/2007 11:47:45 AM | | I'm interested in your thoughts about my Profile and or Photos. Does it have curb appeal? Did I leave anything out or is there some part I should delete. Do I need More humor or should it have a more serious tone? Any ideas on the photos? Do I need More Photos. If you like it the way it is that comment would also be welcome. | |
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Posted: 10/7/2007 8:01:25 PM | | I would add more photos, other then that it's good! | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 12:08:54 PM | | People don't like to read long paragraphs, so break it up a bit. I will take cheerupemokid's word for it that it is fine apart from that. | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 2:06:55 PM | Paragraphs; makes for much easier reading.
You've many capitals whereas they're not required within your profile. I would suggest you run your profile through MS Word and correct all errors you can find.
Women do like to read a well written profile. It shows you've put a little energy into it.
Great selection of photos! | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 8:11:44 PM | Photos are great, I get a sense of who you are and that you love the outdoors. Oh, and a fluffy dog gets bonus points.  But, someone told me in my profile review that your main photo shouldn't be of you in shades. Not sure why.
Random capitalization Of words Needs to Go.
Mrs. Right? Are you marrying her on the first date or are you hoping she's not divorced yet? 
Break up the sentences into paragraphs.
Great profile overall.  | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 9:12:03 PM | Hey,
I am not sure how to create my own thread so I am trying this..can someone review my profile please...also it keeps getting deleted...thx
ABOUT ME:
-Father from Malta , Mother French, Myself Canadian (Vaughan, Ontario)-born at home
-Grade 12- Graduated and went to Italy for two weeks
-Did Grade 13 (OAC) and went to the continent below North America for 1 month to study the culture
-Washington, Atlantic city and New York for New Years (road trip)
-Cuba for a week
-Malta to visit my fathers home country for 2 weeks
-Became the massage master
-Went to George Brown College for 3 years - Graduated with Honours in Finance and Photography 2001-2004
-during which time I visted Japan for 4 months to teach english - stopped by Hong Kong and a few other warm asian countries for a looksee
-Visited my grandma's condo in Hawaii for 2 weeks
-during which time I visted Norwway, Denmark, Sweden, Finalnd, and the big place beside Finland to the east which begins with R
- Went Bungee Jumping / White water rafting / Skydiving + Hang Gliding - Decided I needed a degree and went to Western Univeristy in London Ontario Canada - good fun and smart attractive white people (yah, not all white but heaps for sure)
-canoed through Algonquin visting two beautiful girls - Went Ice climbing in the winter
-Got a job working as a franchise manager for Action Window Cleaning - 1st summer did not bad...(President's award/ Rookie of the year)
- This university decided to screw me over and not transfer any credits over from College...soooo I still wanted my degree...
- Worked for Action Windows for my 2nd summer and did fuc%ing amazing!
- Went to the eastern part of the big continent below Italy/europe that has Lions and elephants and cheetahs for 6 weeks to volunteer - orphanage- (including Christmas and New Years) - dangerous but interesting - got Malaria/ kidnapped, put in a car and everything stolen - fun....
- Got accepted into university at Griffith Univeristy on the East Coast of Australia - travelled to the S. Pacific / Amsterdam, the Great Barrier reef and New Zealand - where I did my 440 foot bungee / ice climbing/ white water boarding
-Had all my important stuff stolen again in Australia
-Lived(ing) in a 2 bedroom unit on the beach, surfing and sunning and studying and riding my motorbike along the coast
- Got world #1 Taj Burrows and 8x world Champion Kelly Slater's Autograph
-Explored the S. Pacific for 1 week / got a leg infection
-Came back to Toronto July 2007
- Probably work for 1-1.5 years to save cash - get some experience working with my pops - ride some horses and then travel to Brazil, maybe Israel, Alaska, and for sure the big country that starts with an I near China and China....
-come back again....hmmmm....open a franchise? Run my own?
LOOKING FOR:
-ideally you don't smoke (as it is my biggest turnoff, espeicailly when kissing is invloved) but i'll survive
-Am looking to date someone, something a little serious possibly, but not necessairly (all depends)
-Should be relaxed, fun and easy going but we can have intelligent conversation as well.
- You like new things (life in general) as I am spontaneous and love photography/ travelling, extreme sports.
- Don't particularly like overly talkative women, women that are clingy/needy. I like women who can be independent without me all the time (includes having me to call every single day). I will treat you to dinner etc once in a while and little gifts here and there but don't expect me to be your Suga Daddy | |
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