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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 5:05:55 PM | I just wish to continue my old thread ideas with a new perspective and approach. Honestly, I am sincerely thankful for all those that read my other thread and contributed to it as well and I do intend to bring back some of the older stuff ..... Thank you...... JD
I close my eyes
And I think of you
For your face is everywhere
That I look
The wind calls your name
And I face the breeze
Extending my arms
I feel your embrace
And I absorb
The warmth of your smile
Yellow upon blue
With no clouds
You surround me
Like trees in a forest
I'm protected against the rain
As I find solace in a gentle brook
I look upon the crystal waters
And your face is there
My heart is the wildflowers
That I pick for you
I hope that you feel my love
As you inhale the fragrance
You are here with me
No matter the space or time
You are in my heart
And I love you | |
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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 5:26:25 PM | I am so frikken Jealous!...
er, I mean good luck.
I am stong enough to bleed
strong enough to conceed
strong enough to need
weak enough to know greed....
Best wishes you Two....
*walks away muttering*
lol | |
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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 6:36:22 PM | Dear J.D.:
Welcome back! Personal pleasure is derived from circumstance expressed with regard to positive loving expressions directed at 'Spiffycat'. Sincerest best wishes to You both!
A poetic rendering is respectfully submitted:
'To Sail'
Sailing into perceived emptiness
Perceived of those of life less
Embark on journey loving two
The dawn together morning dew.
With kindest regards,
Sincerely.
TBK
Post Scripte:
Further poetic writings are looked forward to.
TBK. | |
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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 7:01:29 PM | Whyspr-- Thanks for stopping by and sharing your well-wishes. The last year and few months have been a most remarkable journey that I thank the Lord to have traveled. Thanks again and please feel free to visit again.
Truth-- Laughing-- thanks for stopping by and sharing your well-wishes, my friend. But you know, in all seriousness, in the end all that are true to themselves shall find the things that they seek. You shall find your happiness as your heart and soul is evident through your words. In the meantime, you shall enjoy the journey that you travel. Your words state that you will. I hope that you shall drop by again and that you feel free to share your thoughts and words.
TBK--- Thank you for your dropping by and sharing your kind and respectful words and best-wishes. I hope that you shall feel free to visit again. And best-wishes to you also. I just read your second posting .... thanks for your kind words and I will continue to post more poems as it is in my blood to do so. Again .... please do feel welcomed to visit again and to share your thoughts and words.
Champrins--- Thanks for stopping by and sharing your kind words and defending my thread. Imagine someone, like myself, whom is the very happiest that he has ever been in his entire life seeking pity. I am about to laugh myself silly. Either I have made an enemy amongst fishies in the pond or someone is shallow and presumptious and I guess even did not read the first poem posted in the thread .... a poem about love. How in the world can someone that loves another from the depths of their heart seek sympathy. Whichever it is, I am thankful for you and the others that voted to keep my thread going.
I can not help but smile
At my life and where it stands
I am thankful to God
For what he placed in my hands
A son that is wonderful
That loves me and it shows
And someone that I love
That makes my heart glow
Life could not be much more wonderful
But better it shall be
When things are the way they're meant to be
I shall be living ecstatically | |
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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 7:16:53 PM | Dear J.D.:
Happiness and joy is evident in Your writings, and is a pleasure to the reader.
Personal attempts at poetry are cryptic, and not my fortay.
To be clear, it is most pleasureable to see the evidenced joy in Your writings exploding within Your heart. May You nurture each other and grow together in the fresh dawn of new love.
With sincerest kind wishes, I close:
Respectfully.
TBK. | |
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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 9:45:02 PM | TNT-- Thank you Sir for your kind wishes. They are much appreciated. I hope that you shall feel free to visit and share your thoughts and words again.
Southernfem23-- Thank you for your post.
*** I was reflecting upon my journey over the past year and few months and after Emails from my friends and just honestly following my heart I have decided to post most of my old thread back on this one .... as well as new poems also along the way. Most everyone that posted comments on my old thread most of those I will repost as well ... as truly the words from the heart's of others mean a lot to me. Thank you to all that have been a part of my journey and for those that have read, enjoyed, and commented.***
Author justdifferent
Thread: Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg: 1
Posted: 6/25/2006 11 01 AM
I am thankful to POF for giving all of us this forum to post our thoughts, feelings, and ideas. And I will try to follow their wishes by using an existing thread or this one to post new writes on. If anybody enjoys reading any of my poems most all will be added to this, but I am always willing to contribute to others. There are real talented people on this forum and I enjoy reading their stuff as well. Also, feel free to comment or contribute to anything I post.
"Ten Long Years"
Ten long years without a hug, he just drops his head
At least twelve since he's heard I love you, so emotionally dead
No friends it seems, family aloof, dang he is so alone
Just a kid in his heart, scared of his feelings, he hurt's to the bone
No one understands the torment within, too ashamed to say
He doesn't want others to think he's weak, onward his lonely way
His heart bleeds forever, wounds never close, he's dying for someone to care
Desperately looking for his missing love, into the eyes of other's he glares
She doesn't notice, or doesn't care, fighting the hurt, he carries ahead
Knowing that tomorrow will be like today, his life is full of dread
Needing affection, a touch saying hey I care, to save himself from internal danger
He puts his head in his hands and wipes his tears, how the heck can you ask for a hug from a stranger | |
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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 9:47:31 PM | Author MNDove
Thread: Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg 2
Posted: 6/25/2006 6:03:50 PM
Grab my hand ‘cause I do care, here’s a big hug; let me wipe away those tears. | |
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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 9:48:56 PM | Author justdifferent
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg: 3
Posted: 6/26/2006 11:03:15 PM
"The Storm"
Mounting tension as storm clouds gather
Air filled with excitement as the storm brews
Thunder crashing in the distance speeds his heart with anticipation
Lightning flashing across the sky between her eyes and his
Filling his soul with anxiousness
Sun shining from her face and into his eyes
Taking a moment he glares at the sun's beauty and smiles back
Staring into the eyes of the storm, his heart gets struck by lightning
Electricity fills his body and flashes through his eyes into hers and melts her heart
The storm is close as the thunder gets louder
Flashing lightning becomes more intense and targeted
Giving in to temptation, his mouth searches for hers through closed eyes
Graciously accepting his invitation, the two engage in a kiss that ignites the soul, setting it on fire
The lightning intensifies as their unbridled passion reaches fever pitch and the storm is at hand
Lost in the middle of the storm, caught unprepared for the downpour of passion as their bodies become drenched with sweat and the passionate rain
The storm is upon them, lightning flashes continuously from his eyes to hers
The sound of thunder becomes deafening as their hearts race estatically from the excitement that fills their souls
Loud booms of thunder from the frenzied storm as their bodies crash into each other driving each other mad
Lost in time, the only realization is that the storm is passing
They look into each other's eyes as the last strike of lightning crashes and their bodies collapse as the final crack of thunder rips through their beings
A steady flow of rain drips off their bodies as the storm's end is here
They exchange a knowing glance
Smiling from the soul, they exchange a long slow kiss
Sheltering each other, they silently dream for the next storm | |
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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 9:51:02 PM | justdifferent
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg: 4
Posted: 6/27/2006 11 00 PM
You never know when you might reach someone with something you say, a new friend or a changed life is only a word away, so I decided to put some of my older stuff on the thread. For those that read my poems I would like to say thank you. Also, feel free to Email me if you want to make comments or have questions about my poetry and don't want to post it on a thread. I hope that you enjoy my different view on things, as well as those of the really talented people on this site. We all have one thing in common, those that read and those that write, we connect in one way or another with human expression, which is beautiful all on its own.
Going through a separation and eventual divorce, I wanted to get back to the essence of being betrayed, so I dug up some betrayal poems to help get me through this ordeal as it helps me remember that I have dealt with it before and continued to move forward with life. These are simple poems, but have strong emotions in them. When dealing with hurt and pain, sometimes the simpler things make it easier.
"Betrayed and Alone"
You hurt my heart and affected my soul
Your lack of respect has taken its toll
What once we shared, special and dear
I sorta felt loved, whenever you near
Just your silly giggle, or a happy smile
Just a kind word, hug, or kiss, made my life worthwhile
I thought the bond we shared, was one of the very best
Better than most everything, better than the rest
I thought my company you enjoyed, just chillin' you and me
But my heart was broken, when my eyes were forced to see
The same ones that berated, you chose to leave with them
I stood alone all to myself, this loving heart condemned
I felt so lonely standing there, withholding tears behind my eyes
My heart sobbed unmercifully, through invisible tears I cried
The person in this world, that I admired most
Left me alone without a care, but our friendship was the cost
My heart just sank into my soul, special feelings for you died
I tried to resurrect with memories, girl I really tried
The special feelings that I had, now are gone forever
And they will not ever return, my heart is saying never
"Winds of Change"
A million words that I could speak, each one of you
But the words that I speak now, will forever be true
Honestly I care for you as a person, but I do not feel love
Those feelings have died, now I must rise above
Yes I feel anger and betrayal, wounds have cut me to the soul
But it's still hard to walk away, now that the truth is told
So many memories of times we had, a lot of happiness and fun
But memories is all that's left, when all is said and done
The winds of change are blowing in my heart, saying it's time to go
I will not forget you or the times we shared, honestly I know
"Still Holding On"
We've spent so much time together, I miss you when we're apart
The things we shared and did, have found a place in my heart
I know I should be ashamed, of the way I feel inside
Being friends with you is hard, when feelings of love I have to hide
Probably you don't know what real love is, what feelings are true
But the shame I feel is because I know I don't feel the same as you
The bond between us broken, a feeling once strong and true
But that bridge is burned, a normal friendship will have to do
I do enjoy being around you, fun times when we're together
Since the bond has been broken, soon the ties will be severed
Winds of change still blowing, I hear them beckoning my heart
Our friendship will someday end, and it will tear my soul apart | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 9:53:59 PM | velvetkitten
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
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Posted: 6/28/2006 3 59 AM
*sits in aw* your work is... amasing. I wish I could write like you. you have a very true talent. please write more | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 9:56:24 PM | justdifferent
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg: 8
Posted: 6/28/2006 5 53 PM
Thanks to all that read. Thank you MNDove, Broken Wings, velvetkitten, and smilescolorado for your uplifting comments. I woke up this morning feeling down and your comments lifted my spirits. Thank you much. Poetry is an outlet to release all the inner inhibitions that can clog the heart, mind, and soul. For those that write poetry, continue to be true to yourself. For those that read, live the moment, experience the experience, feel the feelings.
I decided that since I am here, I will post a poem I wrote today for my son.
"That's My Boy"
Gynecologist, doctor, staff and one head nurse
Performing the ritual, many times rehearsed
Doing each their own task, the end result is nigh
Mama-to-be hurting and frustrated, let's out a painful sigh
Seeing the crown of his head, it's almost time his birth
Time for God's blessing, to begin his time on Earth
Daddy's encouraging mama, screams and grabs his hand
A cut by the doctor, baby's in a brand new land
Doctor grabs the baby, suctions mouth and nose
Checking heart and lungs, counting fingers and toes
Daddy's full of pride, eyes of excitement and joy
With a loving smile, saying That's My Boy!! That's My Boy!! | |
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| Are You Strong Enough to Bleed ..... and Love
Posted: 10/10/2007 9:57:42 PM | justdifferent
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg: 9
Posted: 6/28/2006 8 36 PM
Still on my betrayal theme.
"The Pain Within"
You think the pain you feel, is the worst there's ever been
You think that you're so perfect, but still you live in sin
You have all the answers, before the questions are asked
You think your life is hard, being spoiled is such a task
All the pain that you feel, is from selfish obsession
You couldn't have everything, there in your possession
You want it all, everything, that your heart desires
When you die, can you take it with you, to Satan's fires
I wish that you could feel my pain, a true pain inside
If you could, I do wonder, whether you already would have died
I did all I could for you, but still you don't care
The tears running down my face right now, is my pain you wouldn't share
Why do I hurt so bad, why must I cry
I've given everything I could, now I wish to die
Tell me what I asked in return, what special demands
I never asked for anything, that's why I don't understand
I just wanted your respect, for you to know somebody cared
But you never cared at all, all this hurt I must bare
I wish I could find a way, to let you go somehow
I wish I could live without you, starting here right now | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 9:59:42 PM | SpiffyKat~Luvs~JD
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg: 10
Posted: 6/28/2006 9:08:14 PM
Hiya:)Ive been admiring your work around the forums,so I just had to peek in here:).Im so glad you have your own thread.Welcome to the poetry forums.Your writes are fantastic.Looking forward to reading more,Kat | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 10:01:03 PM | justdifferent
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg: 11
Posted: 6/28/2006 10 28 PM
Kat,
Thank you very much for your compliments. I enjoy your works as well as I wish I saw things the way you do. But that is the beauty of poetry, being able to see what others see through their eyes. I really was sincere when I said I am a fan of the ones that entered the old contest, including yourself. I am in awe sometimes at the writes. I hope everyone continues to write and post. Thank you again Kat.
I wrote this poem tonight when I really should have been in bed. But when the words are in my heart and from my heart, I have to release them. So here's my new one.
"If I"
If I made a promise, and truly did abide
If I trusted you with my heart, and I never lied
If I picked you a flower, just because I cared
If I listened to your feelings, remember all you shared
If I can tell to you, what is your favorite flower
If I give you a say, and truly shared the power
If I wrote you a poem, saying that I love you
If I showed you everyday, that what I wrote was true
If I kissed you with passion, out for all to see
If I told you I love you, and meant it honestly
If I held you close, never wanting to let go
If I called home from work missing you, just to let you know
If I nursed you back to health, when you feeling ill
If I cleaned up your heart, after tears you spill
If I looked you in the eyes, said you are my one
If I picked up your pieces, when you come undone
If I listened to all your words, even the blatant lies
If I wiped away your tears, all the ones you cry
If I did all these things, and offered a heart that's true
Would you go out with me, if I wanted you to | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 10:02:17 PM | 4everDreaming
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
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Posted: 6/28/2006 11:08:33 PM
wow Just you have some really great writes, i am glad to se eyou out sharing with all of us, kudos | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 10:04:13 PM | ltliving
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg: 14
Posted: 6/29/2006 8:35:24 AM
Wow! Amazing stuff. Another poet who can feel what is inside my heart! Keep up the great work and look forward to more. | |
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Posted: 10/10/2007 10:05:53 PM | justdifferent
Are You Strong Enough To Bleed
Msg: 15
Posted: 6/29/2006 2 54 PM
1littleflick, mndove, ltliving.
Thank you very much for your kind words. I am glad that you appreciate and enjoy my works. Thank you very much.
justdifferent
I wrote more poems today and will go ahead and post one of them while I am here.
"Wishes of the mind"
I want to be touched
to feel the passion
the heat from your fingertips
To feel it burning in my mind
The burning embers that are your fingertips
I want you to touch and scorch
I want to feel the heat engulf my flesh
and send chills to my soul
I want to feel the goosebumps in my heart
I want to be entranced
to be mesmerized by your feminine essence
to orbit around you
to exist only with you for an eternal moment
to hear only your voice in a room of noise
to see only your eyes in an ocean of stares
to crave only your touch, and shiver from that thought
to feel your presence with eyes closed
I want to hear your lips whisper with thundering sounds of passion softly saying kiss me with your soul by means of a sexy pout
I want to feel your soul tremble when I find your heart's erotic spot
I want to hear you gasp my name and look at me with pleading eyes as smoldering emotional turmoil fills your body with chaotic pleasures
I want to feel the elctricity as your eyes beg my eyes to beg you for your touch
I want your body to quiver and shake at my touch as your soul and mind becomes invigorated like a virgin canvas being stroked by the experienced paintbrush of an artist
I want to become weak-kneed and dizzy as your touch becomes wine to an alcoholic mind, my only want is to drink from your hands until my mind is filled with confusion and all that exists is a state of ectasy
To have dreamed, but never experienced
To die a lifetime just to live the fleeting moment of soul filled sexual fantasy
To experience the erotic dream in a romantic mind
Alas, all I can do is dream
Thank you for reading. | |
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