| Need a review on my pro.
Posted: 10/29/2007 2:08:10 PM | Don't beat around the bush, tell it to me as it it.
honestly the 200 letter limit thing is annoying.
honestly the 200 letter limit thing is annoying.
honestly the 200 letter limit thing is annoying.
honestly the 200 letter limit thing is annoying.
honestly the 200 letter limit thing is annoying. | |
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| Need a review on my pro.
Posted: 10/29/2007 5:40:10 PM | Ok- change the pic - get rid of the mess behind you and add a SMILE. You need to add other activities also (travel, sports, dancing- whatever sounds fun) you sound much too serious for a 19 yr. old (take it from someone who has a very serious side).
Change 1st date to dinner or whatever we agree on - let her feel she has a say in what happens (and leave out the $75 -that is way too much to spend the first time you meet someone).
Add some humor, a sense that you are a fun person to be with who has a serious side and you may need to change the word Solemn-yeah, I know, it's a great word, but when trying to attract a young woman's attention, it gives an impression of just what it means, dour, unsmiling, depressed, a downer...so there you go, good luck! | |
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| Need a review on my pro.
Posted: 4/7/2008 8:48:49 AM | If you are still singing, check out tis website. I get alot of help from them
www.ReadyToSing.net | |
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| Need a review on my pro.
Posted: 4/7/2008 9:17:04 AM | hehe! i wouldnt add this part. sounds freaky beaky
"I also like to fantasize about being other people. It's lame, but aren't we all lame in one way, or another? "
and with the below paragraph
you really dont need to add how much you would spend on a date either and the rest comes across as too controlling. It is best to make a girl feel secure on a date but the message doesnt sound too friendly.
"First DateI'd take her to dinner nothing too expensive, nothing too cheap. 75 bucks would be the limit. Get to know eachother, ask questions, nothing too personal, though. After getting to know eachother, I don't know, if the place has a designated area for dancing, guess we'd dance. After that I'd take her home, and hopefully get her number."
good luck with whatever you choose to do anyhoo :) | |
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| Need a review on my pro.
Posted: 4/7/2008 10:40:01 AM | The picture needs to go for 2 reasons. First, there's lots f clutter around you. This is your first impression. You dont want girls to think you are messy.
Second, you say that you have long hair but this picture shows you with a buz cut. Is the picture just really old? Get a new pic of you smiling.
This worries me
"Playing guitar is another thing I love to do, one of the things that keeps me from doing something seriously bad."
It's good that you play guitar. Many women find musical talent attractive. The fact that you are capable of doing something really bad is scarry. Women will run away from this.
1st rule of dating: Dont talk about religion or politics on a first date. Get rid of your rant about religion on your profile.
Goood luck! | |
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