| Just made some changes
Posted: 11/3/2007 6:23:13 PM | Hey there!
I'm looking for a second opinion. Just recently made some changes according to someone's advice. Sounded like good advice. But I would really like to hear at least a couple of other voices.
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| Just made some changes
Posted: 11/4/2007 12:30:04 PM | | Hey there, I didn't see your first effort, so I can't comment on changes, but I can tell you, I had to find your age....because the pictures look like you could be 15 to 45...?? I couldn't get a good idea of how old you are!! :0) | |
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| Just made some changes
Posted: 11/4/2007 9:37:17 PM | I found the 'newspaper column' style annoying and difficult to read.
Seems a bit choppy, and doesn't have a natural flow.
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