| Profile Revew. Posted: 11/8/2007 9:34:49 AM | Ok, I'm ready to have my profile disected. Anyone care to have a look and give me an honest opinion?
I would really appreciate some suggestions to make it more appealing, short of getting major body modifications.. ;)
TIA. | |
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| Profile Revew. Posted: 11/8/2007 12:38:40 PM | no bodog girl pics silly boy! ;)
Othewise I kinda like it. Short and sweet. And not ****y like mine. lol | |
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| Profile Revew. Posted: 11/8/2007 12:41:46 PM | | Awww.. you don't like my strippers??? Darn... | |
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| Profile Review Please... Posted: 11/8/2007 11:15:06 PM | Ok, my profile is either perfect or so bad it doesn't even warrant comment....
Can ya help a brotha out? | |
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| Profile Revew. Posted: 11/9/2007 5:26:45 AM | Make pic #3 your main for now. But as soon as you can, get a decent head shot without the hat for the main picture (taken outside if possible - natural light is more flattering). You look a little bleary in pic #7 - not a good choice as a main shot.
You might consider adding "reading" to your interests - the Ayn Rand reference might catch a few eyes. While you're at it - add in a bunch more interests. Especially things you might do WITH somebody... show that you are fun to spend time with.
Your About Me is rather sparse, and just like 946,486 other men on here. Read these tips and see if you can give it some more oomph:
http://forums.plentyoffish.com/datingPosts1262627.aspx
*** Just a note, if I email you, it doesn't necessarily mean I want to have a relationship with your or I want to jump in bed with you. It very well may just be that I wanted to say hello, or whatever. No need to freak out and block someone just because they say hello. ***
Get rid of this. Nobody likes a whiner. If somebody blocks you, that's HER issue - don't make it yours.
Good luck. | |
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| Profile Review Please... Posted: 11/9/2007 5:30:07 AM | Not a bad profile overall, both in length and content, but a bit “light”. add some more about YOU (not hobby), your wants, dreams etc etc
Drop completely: ** Just a note, if I email you, it doesn't necessarily mean I want to have a relationship with your or I want to jump in bed with you. It very well may just be that I wanted to say hello, or whatever. No need to freak out and block someone just because they say hello. ***
Double edge sword….will bite you back
Pics: Drop #2 & 4 , Crop/Zoom #1, use #3 as main, or another one.
Hope it helps!
Good luck! | |
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| Profile Revew. Posted: 11/9/2007 5:59:19 AM | Your profile isn't bad. Drop the lady from your main pic - I wasn't sure until I clicked on the profile whether you were a guy or a girl. You can crop her out or use a different pic as your main ( I think someone else suggested #3? Good choice).
Also you should add what you're looking for in a woman. Describe your ideal woman, or at least some of the traits you think are necessary in a date.
You sound like a fun guy. I'm sure you'll have no trouble getting a date. Good luck and happy fishing! | |
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| Profile Revew. Posted: 11/11/2007 9:44:45 PM | | I totally suck at writing about myself. I am sure there are more compelling reasons that someone should want to go out with me, I just can't ever seem to think of what to say... | |
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