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 iamnotsinfuld

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"A Gorgeous Plane Crash"
Posted: 11/22/2007 3:36:54 PM
a poem i wrote earlier in the year

"A Gorgeous Plane Crash"
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you the plane, me the firey explosion
my red and orange fingers creeping up your smooth, shiny body.
Both of us blindingly racing back towards Earth.
I can hear something screaming inside of you.
I want to reach in and fix it with but my hands are burning and there isnt enough time. So I just hang on, licking my way up your steel frame.
I run my hot hands over your riveted stomach and you explode again, sending us into a tailspin.
We are dancing.
or I am.
i cant see your expression as i havent made it to your head.
but i know you HAVE to be feeling something as we twirl toward the ocean
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