| Need a critic profile review truth please.
Posted: 12/3/2007 3:05:03 PM | I have been on this site for a week or so. Not getting much reponse from people. Im not sure if its my face or what i have typed. Is there anyone out there who will respond. I can take the blows. After all if I didnt want the truth I would not have asked. So let me have it........................... Hopefully it wont be to bad.??????? | |
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| Need a critic profile review truth please.
Posted: 12/3/2007 3:21:49 PM | 1) I would get more pictures and try to get a head shot for the main profile picture. Maybe some pictures of you having fun...
2) rewrite your profile
Start by making several paragraphs. I would elaborate on intrests more IE get rid of "I can have fun in the city or on the side of a mountain. " and go into more detail of what you would be doing for fun.
3) don't mention your ex. It gives the impression you aren't over her and are still on the rebound.
4) When you rewrite and get several paragraphs make sure to put a blank line between them, and use some sensible structure. IE stay on one general topic with each paragraph. I like the first one to be about me and the last one to be about what I am looking for. | |
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| Need a critic profile review truth please.
Posted: 12/3/2007 3:41:59 PM | RockTownLuvin just gave you good advice and I hope you follow it. He gave you a good review which I agree whole heartedly with.
Also I would put a profession down. When a woman sees no mention of a profession they automatically click right onto the next profile.
You must have some interests, what you have now is a turn off. Every body has some passion.
Great tips here for a good profile;
http://forums.plentyoffish.com/datingPosts1262627.aspx
All the best
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| Need a critic profile review truth please.
Posted: 12/3/2007 3:58:20 PM | i agree, ditch the whole ex wife thing, she is gone, don't mention her, ladies HATE hearing about EXes from what i've experienced. More pics is always a plus, and pretend you are happy. i got the "i'm an ax murderer" vibe from that one default pic haha. ok, maybe not that bad, but it doesn't look like your thrilled about having a picture taken.
also, add more to the whole "about you" thing and put in there what your looking for. | |
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