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Posted: 12/16/2007 1:21:54 AM | Am I ugly? Is my profile not descriptive enough? Or am I cruddy writer? I just don't know what to do with myself! I really need advice. Someone, give me your honest opinions!
I'm just joking. I know it's awesome. But honestly, I'm looking to throw a new curve. Something funny. Never done before. And genius. And who could forget working?
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Posted: 12/16/2007 1:48:39 AM | Awesome man, I have to be honest, you're a very handsome man, but you sound a little over emotional in your profile. It's just my opinion of course, but I personally don't find emotional men particularly attractive. Passionate - yes, charismatic - yes, strong minded - yes, and caring - yes, but for me the caring part is a bit over stated, and there's not much sign of the rest of it.  | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 3:06:32 AM | Nice picture.
Add paragraphs. Should be enough to catch a juicy fish. :)
Adventurous type - describe one.
Overall, good. Excellent picture. I'd add more detail. :) | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 4:25:28 AM | AwesomeMan3221,, You use the term "need" twice in conjoining sentences.. I might view that as NEEDY... perhaps change that ( and only that! lol) to I am looking for.
That's all, you look great and sound like a son I would be proud of! Good Luck | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 6:29:29 AM | AM,
You seem like a nice guy. Your profession is admirable and your outlook on life is ... well in your words "Awesome"... as I said, your words, not mine.
Excluding your name (which I assume the high number is due to the other 3220 people that already have AwesomeMan); you mention the word "Awesome" 4 times ... I felt like I had stepped into the 90's again 
You "say" that you are fun loving and adventurous, yet you give no indication as to how, no further reference. Tell us about your exploits and believe me, there is no sign of humour in your profile (unless this is all meant as a joke and ... nope I still don't get it).
Reading your profile further tells us that you love kids, want to find your soul mate and are seeking the woman to hold you when you cry.
All that is missing from your profile is the long walks on the beach & deep talks about feelings and you have successfully created a generic profile.
*Hint* There are so many generic profiles on here, you may be skipped over.
A profile should be eye-catching and charismatic.
Use paragraphs, it makes for easier reading, thus more appealing.
Be original, from your name all the way down to the first date ... stand out .
You are in touch with your emotions which is great, but you cannot expect to find a fish when you are trying to live a life inside a poem.
Good luck and happy 
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Posted: 12/16/2007 8:23:50 AM | Actually like your writing quite a bit. It's positive, structured, and has a defined flow to it.
There just needs to be more of it to help create a very clear and defined image of you.
Didn't really see any of the usual red flags. Picture is rather nice, so don't worry about that.
Just keep writing, you're on the right track. | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 3:26:45 PM | i dunno if you've changed your profile recently, but it looks fine to me.. and you have a lovely smile and like george carlin and mr rogers.. what more could a gal ask for?  looks like a winner to me!
have fun
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Posted: 12/17/2007 9:42:53 PM | | You talk about what you need but not so much about what you have to offer. Saying AwesomeMan isn't really enough and kind of seems arrogant. Good pic though. I can't believe you aren't getting a lot of messages. | |
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Posted: 12/17/2007 9:48:39 PM | Self titling yourself as a Doctor is rather misleading....since you are too young to hold an MD degree, but I do admire you for your profession and working with special children.
Break the profile up with paragraphs and add more photos.
Looking for "soul mate" is so cliche and so overused. Tell us about some of your adventures. Anyone can say they are.....maybe a photo of you skydiving or bunge jumping would help.
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Posted: 1/31/2008 12:15:09 AM | | my biggest question is why aren't you getting laid left right and centre? You're doctor, dude. Chicks dig doctors. | |
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Posted: 1/31/2008 1:07:23 PM | | In that case, use paragraphs and sections. Take my own profile as an example. | |
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