| Haiku Game [Locked Continued on another thread see last post]
Posted: 12/16/2007 4:03:10 PM | would like to start something new here I searched for it but could not find anything with a haiku game. This game works like first line last line but must be in the form of a haiku. If there is one and I just didn't see it let me know so that we can delete this and I will post on there. For those of you who don't know the rules of first line last line, you have to make your haiku starting with the last line of the haiku above you, and for those of you who don't know what a Haiku is. It consists of five syllabels in the first line, seven syllabels in the second line, and then back to five syllabels in the last line, and I beleave it dosen't ryme either. If I am wrong please correct me and I will post the correct version of a haiku. This dosen't have to be perfect so If we miss a few syllabels here or there or add extra ones, I am more concerned with having fun and trying to see what you can come up with from the other persons line above you.
In the sun I see
spots wrinkle my eyes
mother was right. | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 4:10:35 PM | hmmm...5/7/5 I will have to change the last line a wee bit..
mother was correct
the light follows the darkness
it may take some time
EDIT o.k. 4leaf you beat me to it
Brawny dog on fire
that dog is always steaming
and that ain't no joke | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 4:30:44 PM | that ain't no joke
smiles wide and open
children laugh too. | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 4 | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 4:35:16 PM | Children laughing too
Spotty dog fell in the loo
reeking now of poo
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Posted: 12/16/2007 7:41:24 PM | reeking now of poo
such smell of the day
under my old shoe. | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 6 | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 7:51:00 PM | under my old shoe
rattlers head slipping looser
oh no; what to do
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Posted: 12/16/2007 7:55:19 PM | oh no; what to do
my keys are lost again
world without keys. | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 8:00:09 PM | world without keys
Lost soul despite her smiling
Foregoing her dreams | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 9 | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 8:00:46 PM | world without keys
memories of younger days
freedom has now fled
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Posted: 12/16/2007 8:12:32 PM | freedom has now fled
this research made me brain dead
dreams fill my head now | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 8:13:29 PM | freedom has now fled
to the tombs of her life
forgoing her dreams. | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 8:13:45 PM | freedom has now fled
in rose colored technibloom
eyes hold laughter still | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 8:24:48 PM | eyes hold laughter still
smiles hide danger with in
people are different | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 9:46:25 PM | people are different
life turns various corners
and boldly we drive | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 9:57:09 PM | and boldly we drive
horizon unreachable
wings of little birds | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:39:58 PM | Wings of little birds
Soaring as eagles above
Majestic beauty | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 17 | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:40:53 PM | wings of little birds
delicious chilli hot
daintily absurd
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 18 | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:44:25 PM | Sorry Blue Tooooooo slow here
majestic beauty
peaceful mountain fall scenery
avalanches equalise
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:49:34 PM | avalanches equalise
great mountains see their beauty
monuments from stone | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:50:36 PM | Avalanches equalise
As a metaphore for life
Trickling brooks smile | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:52:20 PM | trickling brooks smile
wonder fill with joy and hope
children play in water | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 22 | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:54:38 PM | children play in water
bugger; wheres the life guard
children drowning fast
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:55:10 PM | Children play in water
'Neath the mighty Oak they rest
Joyful sunlit days | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:57:54 PM | you are wonderfull blue shushin don't ever give up.
lol | |
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longte
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Joined: 10/18/2004
Msg: 25 | |
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Posted: 12/16/2007 10:58:19 PM | :::sigh::: LOL..... I concede! :)
but only when you're smiling
welcome into playing
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